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Array ( [sid] => 100756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Obscure [time] => 2005-07-10 16:43:03 [hometext] => Something I wrote super fast, so don't expect too much! lol [bodytext] => Picture frames...empty
memory box...full

Our future...finished
new life...started

All hope...lost
my reality...found

Dreams...shattered
hearts...mending

Feelings...dead
mind...alive

Foolhardy...sad
painfully aware...happy

Misconceptions...dried up
perceptions...flowing

Possibilities...open
your mind...closed [comments] => 16 [counter] => 325 [topic] => 64 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 54 [ratings] => 12 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Obscure

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Picture frames...empty
memory box...full

Our future...finished
new life...started

All hope...lost
my reality...found

Dreams...shattered
hearts...mending

Feelings...dead
mind...alive

Foolhardy...sad
painfully aware...happy

Misconceptions...dried up
perceptions...flowing

Possibilities...open
your mind...closed




Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-07-10 16:43:03]
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Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:09:18 PM AEST
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i see what you getting at here scorp
a good write that illuminates good ideas and thoughts

nice as always
cant wait for more......


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodyTearDrops on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:09:16 PM AEST
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I Liked It . It Is The First One I Have Read Of Yours And It Makes Me Want To Read More.
.:Chelsey:.


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:28:53 PM AEST
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Scorp, so truly talented delievers another fantastic, creative write. Always a pleasure to read ur brillant work.
Hugs,
Dreamer


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:45:33 PM AEST
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Between those ... lie something, powerful, intense and mysterious.

This has a unique signature that is resounding.

Kie


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:50:14 PM AEST
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considering you wrote that super fast, it was amazing, well done!!!

pix xx


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:16:29 PM AEST
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I feel ya Scorp..
sometimes a few words is all it takes.

Thoughts and prayers to you..

B


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:25:05 PM AEST
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Great job
You are the best at making
my noodle cook I LOVE the 1st stanza
pulled me right in
So simple but complex too
your amazing MUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joey


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:33:06 PM AEST
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such a befitting title.

i love the format of this...and the message.

i like the brevity of it all.

new beginnings can be tough..but they are what you make them...make this one great!

wizard


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:28:56 PM AEST
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THis was powerful man. The first time I read it, I could almost feel it being shouted out. The second time was like getting slapped with words, right in the face. I loved that. Great write. Peace to you. Laura


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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Splendid!!! And life goes on, finally.

Rita


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:13:40 PM AEST
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Interesting and so insightful..
Good work,
Jenni


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:20:23 PM AEST
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well i didnt expect much.
the poem was ok.
the periods got annoying quickly and there wasnt really much emotion in the poem. this poem could be amazing if it were reworked.
but thats just my opinion.
3/5
sorry
-Rebekah


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:35:08 AM AEST
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I must admit Scorp, it's So Ironic, nothing annoying about this poem at all. Speaking your mind is very interesting when you do it and you speak it so well. Very dynamic!!!


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:18:31 AM AEST
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nice change of pace scorp and i can read between the lines, well done . . .

Ben


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:08:03 PM AEST
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Don't underestimate yourself. Fast or thoughtout, your work is amazing. That was a good collection of your thoughts formed into a working poem. Very good.


Re: Obscure (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 02:10:29 PM AEST
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The tragedy of life............
And the reality as well.




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