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Can't you see Devil's about
You must never let him win
He will lead you into sin

All the things you shouldn't do
He will place in front of you
Play's the fiddle all day long
Tries to get you to do wrong

Temptation each and every day
Go on, do it, he will say
Tapping on your shoulder hard
Hopes to win the evil card

Do not listen to the sound
Of his voice, the underground
Do not let his sin take root
Kick him out with your big boot
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The Devil

Contributed by gwenevere on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Hey ,you now, watch out, watch out
Can't you see Devil's about
You must never let him win
He will lead you into sin

All the things you shouldn't do
He will place in front of you
Play's the fiddle all day long
Tries to get you to do wrong

Temptation each and every day
Go on, do it, he will say
Tapping on your shoulder hard
Hopes to win the evil card

Do not listen to the sound
Of his voice, the underground
Do not let his sin take root
Kick him out with your big boot




Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-10 13:05:18]
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Re: The Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:42:11 PM AEST
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Gwenevere I just love this one I have been fighting this devil all of my life. I will have to wait and see if I have been successful or not. Bernard


Re: The Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by zenaprincess on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:46:32 PM AEST
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love this! i like the rhythm and how its kind of upbeat although whilst still being all about EVIL!!! Cool. Well done


Re: The Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by forsaken_soul33 on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:18:00 PM AEST
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This poem sounded cool. Great job. You did a godd job with the rhymes.
bye,
☺Mando☺


Re: The Devil (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:16:21 PM AEST
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i know his ways all too well...you've summed it up greatly.

wizard




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