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Helpless
Contributed by
Shyness
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:23:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm sick and tiered of all these lies,
All these dashed hopes and failed tries,
I wish I could run away and leave it all,
Just get away before I make someone else fall,
I found a new way to help stop me when I start to think,
But how long will I last before it throws me out of sink,
How long can I manage before it destroys me,
Well at least this time the effects are in a way no one will see,
This decision is one I must forever hide,
No one would understand no matter how hard they tried,
I'm confused and I don't know what I should do,
I just cant bare to tell others what I'm ging threw,
I feel so helpless and weak inside but I still try to act strong,
I don't know how to deal with everything that's gone wrong,
Why can't I handle everything without throwing a fit,
Words can't describe how bad I'm sick of this *****,
All this bad news is starting to make my ears ring,
I just wish I knew a way to fix everything,
But even when I try to help people I find things beyond my control,
And the fact I can't do anything is really taking its toll.
But I'll handle this now because it's nothing I can undo,
I'll once again smile falsely and struggle threw.
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Shyness
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2005-07-09 16:23:26]
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Re: Helpless
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:03:05 PM AEST
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A very powerful, emotional write...Great job expressing yourself. There were some typos here and there, and a couple misspelled words such as; 'sink' should be 'sync' and 'threw' should be 'through.' Other than that, this was a well penned write. Welcome to YPDC!!
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Re: Helpless
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 11:08:16 AM AEST
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this is truly a terrific write. i love the honesty and emotion you put into it.
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