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All she does is think about you
She tells others that you are just a friend
But she knows she wants you in the end
You are on her thoughts all the time
When you are near, shivers go up her spine
But she knows she should not like you
For you and her could never be true
But she still has the feelings
When ever you help in her healing
When she is upset and down,
You always frown when you see her frown
You make her smile
Even if it takes awhile
Want to make her laugh
And not think of death
You may know of her want to die
You may know that she never cries
Because she is in too much pain,
So you always pull her out of the rain
When she is feeling down and sad,
Seeing her upset makes you mad,
Taking care of her confuses her, though,
Causing her stress, because she knows
That you two couldn’t be more than friends
So her life is becoming painful and she wants the end
She gets hurt all the time by life
And you are the only one next to her in this strife
She likes you, but knows she should not
And she tries not to like you, gives it all she’s got,
She is confused about life and angry at it, too,
So she should really like you,
Not right now, but she can’t stop liking you
And she just doesn’t know what to do
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Confusing Feelings

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:45:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She does not know what to do,
All she does is think about you
She tells others that you are just a friend
But she knows she wants you in the end
You are on her thoughts all the time
When you are near, shivers go up her spine
But she knows she should not like you
For you and her could never be true
But she still has the feelings
When ever you help in her healing
When she is upset and down,
You always frown when you see her frown
You make her smile
Even if it takes awhile
Want to make her laugh
And not think of death
You may know of her want to die
You may know that she never cries
Because she is in too much pain,
So you always pull her out of the rain
When she is feeling down and sad,
Seeing her upset makes you mad,
Taking care of her confuses her, though,
Causing her stress, because she knows
That you two couldn’t be more than friends
So her life is becoming painful and she wants the end
She gets hurt all the time by life
And you are the only one next to her in this strife
She likes you, but knows she should not
And she tries not to like you, gives it all she’s got,
She is confused about life and angry at it, too,
So she should really like you,
Not right now, but she can’t stop liking you
And she just doesn’t know what to do

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Re: Confusing Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:16:16 PM AEST
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who is this hmm? plz be open with me i kno its hard... but god shell i am here for u... u have to know that... TALK TO ME PLEASE. i love ya shell... plz plz PLZ talk to me
love love love,
jennie*

Re: Confusing Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:44:25 PM AEST
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My advice to you is make your plea-
true love will win over..

what a sad write..
though very well written,
but so sad..
hope he comes around!

B

Re: Confusing Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:14:58 PM AEST
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Ah, the complicated emtions of the human mind that we cannot comprehend. Feelings are something that we can't explain. This is the best example of that.

My advice to her is to back away from her suicidal ways and look at the more happier things in life. And may admit to him her feelings him...though that is a very hard thing to do.
-Bones

P.S.
Another good, well-written poem. Keep up the good work! PEACE!!! lol

Re: Confusing Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:19:57 PM AEST
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So much pain and doubt here sprint,
tell him how you feel. I know it's hard
but some things are truly worth it!
Why sit and suffer so. good write, I felt
every bit of it.

~Blue~

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