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Array ( [sid] => 100595 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Layers [time] => 2005-07-08 19:37:26 [hometext] => *Please comment* It's been a while since I've written anything....... [bodytext] => Outer layers of one's self reveal nothing,
They tell no truth's only lies,
You'll never truly know a person,
Until you know their insides.
Inner layers reveal pasttimes, sorrow, pains, and joys,
Outer layers reveal longings to fit in,
Desires to have everyone approve.

Our outsides are coated with what people want us to be,
Only on the inside is where one truly can be set free,
Sometimes the inside is something no one else will ever see,
Maybe that is truly how it should be.

A mystery.......... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 71 [informant] => Apolla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

Layers

Contributed by Apolla on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Outer layers of one's self reveal nothing,
They tell no truth's only lies,
You'll never truly know a person,
Until you know their insides.
Inner layers reveal pasttimes, sorrow, pains, and joys,
Outer layers reveal longings to fit in,
Desires to have everyone approve.

Our outsides are coated with what people want us to be,
Only on the inside is where one truly can be set free,
Sometimes the inside is something no one else will ever see,
Maybe that is truly how it should be.

A mystery..........

Copyright © Apolla ... [ 2005-07-08 19:37:26]
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Re: Layers (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:17:54 PM AEST
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yes, it's a mystery. perhaps when the world closes it's eyes and starts using it's heart, maybe then we can be all be free...
nice work
thanks for sharing

Re: Layers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:04:10 PM AEST
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This is the first poem i' ve read by you, it

won't be the last, this poem has 2 be

second only 2 the bible in it's thruth, mick

ought 2 post this as ypdc's credo of respect

on here, absolutely beautiful, love your style . .

Ben

Re: Layers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 08:48:32 PM AEST
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a very true poem but i guess that's what ppl should strive for. to not let others perceptions dictate how they act and live. great poem! ^_^

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