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Array ( [sid] => 100592 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Old Friend [time] => 2005-07-08 18:05:39 [hometext] => hey, please comment on whether i should e-mail my friend or not. I know, I start out bitter, but I kinda let it go. I have no idea what to do, so some help would be appreciated. Maybe she's mature enough to forgive, and maybe not. [bodytext] => I guess we grew apart,
but what right is yours
to rip away my heart
and steal our mutual friend

To turn them all against me
to make me feel alone
when will i be free
of this empty feeling?

I want to cry in class,
wish to get away
can't wait until at last
I got to a different school

Get away from the scars
Of my little pondered past
I wish upon the stars
that id feel good again

Although i don't want
to be with you again,
you know not how you haunt,
how i wish it all were well

I guess Im just no good
at being someone's friend,
Maybe I even could
Have worked harder.

I miss you but I don't,
Want you, but no way.
hope and that you won't
aknowledge me again

I am almost over it,
I harbor no more resent,
But i can't yet forget
the bad times that we shared

The times I cried in school
All alone and sad
The times I looked uncool
because you made me so.

I somehow wish I could,
patch up a bit, at least,
hope maybe you would,
recieve an e-mail from me.

Perhaps it's wishful thinking,
but maybe now your gone
I forget what I was thinking,
when I broke off with you

Perhaps some day we could
just talk at the mall,
Perhaps one day you would,
forgive me for it all.

I don't know if i like you,
but maybe we could be
passing friends or so,
if you bumped into me.

I wonder what would happen
if I e-mailed you just once
I wounder if you'd
be mad, of yell at me.

I wonder if you'd let
the bygones be bygone
wonder if you'd get
the big picture of life

I once dreamed we had respect
For eachother, and were nice
I wonder what to expect
if I were to contact you.

I really think wan't to,
But I don't know I should.
it's been only 4 months,
but then, that's alot.

Should i? maybe I will, maybe I won't


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 16 [informant] => aplsdka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Old Friend

Contributed by aplsdka on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:05:39 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



I guess we grew apart,
but what right is yours
to rip away my heart
and steal our mutual friend

To turn them all against me
to make me feel alone
when will i be free
of this empty feeling?

I want to cry in class,
wish to get away
can't wait until at last
I got to a different school

Get away from the scars
Of my little pondered past
I wish upon the stars
that id feel good again

Although i don't want
to be with you again,
you know not how you haunt,
how i wish it all were well

I guess Im just no good
at being someone's friend,
Maybe I even could
Have worked harder.

I miss you but I don't,
Want you, but no way.
hope and that you won't
aknowledge me again

I am almost over it,
I harbor no more resent,
But i can't yet forget
the bad times that we shared

The times I cried in school
All alone and sad
The times I looked uncool
because you made me so.

I somehow wish I could,
patch up a bit, at least,
hope maybe you would,
recieve an e-mail from me.

Perhaps it's wishful thinking,
but maybe now your gone
I forget what I was thinking,
when I broke off with you

Perhaps some day we could
just talk at the mall,
Perhaps one day you would,
forgive me for it all.

I don't know if i like you,
but maybe we could be
passing friends or so,
if you bumped into me.

I wonder what would happen
if I e-mailed you just once
I wounder if you'd
be mad, of yell at me.

I wonder if you'd let
the bygones be bygone
wonder if you'd get
the big picture of life

I once dreamed we had respect
For eachother, and were nice
I wonder what to expect
if I were to contact you.

I really think wan't to,
But I don't know I should.
it's been only 4 months,
but then, that's alot.

Should i? maybe I will, maybe I won't






Copyright © aplsdka ... [ 2005-07-08 18:05:39]
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Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 01:30:14 AM AEST
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Not bad for a beginner,
Anyways keep penning.


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:42:16 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem who were you talking about tho


Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:42:30 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem who were you talking about tho




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