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What a lie
Cause here I am wanting to cry
So you said you’d keep my happy
What a lie
Cause I here I am about to cry
So you said you wouldn’t hurt me
What a lie
Cause I here am ready to cry
You promised me all these things
So why am I beginning to cry?
You really let me down this time
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You let me down

Contributed by confused on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 11:38:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



So you said you’d be there for me
What a lie
Cause here I am wanting to cry
So you said you’d keep my happy
What a lie
Cause I here I am about to cry
So you said you wouldn’t hurt me
What a lie
Cause I here am ready to cry
You promised me all these things
So why am I beginning to cry?
You really let me down this time




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Re: You let me down (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:37:00 PM AEST
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nice poem i like the flow....sorry about your friend...i did that before...i felt so bad...i know how you feel...hope you make it up to him


Re: You let me down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:29:56 PM AEST
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Good job you lil. punk rocker you
And thats not a lie


Re: You let me down (User Rating: 1 )
by RoxyGirl on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:37:14 AM AEST
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Just look up.And remember a nother day will come.And forget about the man who didn't really love. I Liked your too
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL


Re: You let me down (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST
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i know how this feels
don't worry, it will get better
alex


Re: You let me down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 06:57:56 AM AEST
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Wow.....you can see the tears hitting the paper reading this poem.... I enjoy the honesty you expose in your poetry.... Short but very effective..... A truly talented poet you are!!!!!! Never regret or be ashamed of that.... Excellent work!!!!!




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