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With you I can be as open as the sea

I have nothing to hide from you

Not even the tears I cry when I miss you

You see in me, something no one else could

You have also seen something I never show

Something no one else could see

You say no one ever bothered to look

As deeply as you did and do so everyday

And when you do you find

The best and worst of me

And nothing changes between us

We will never stop growing closer

I will never stop loving you

You have all my trust, you have faith in me

You let me be the best I can be

With out you I could not be anything

Beautiful to anyone, nothing special in any way

With out you I would not be alive today

You really are my angel my savior

You say I am your AngeL

But in truth you gave me my wings

And with you I feel more than happy and wealthy

You are now and will always be

This worlds one true treasure

And I hope that you will always be mine
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This Worlds One True Treasure

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:55:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I believe with you I will never break

With you I can be as open as the sea

I have nothing to hide from you

Not even the tears I cry when I miss you

You see in me, something no one else could

You have also seen something I never show

Something no one else could see

You say no one ever bothered to look

As deeply as you did and do so everyday

And when you do you find

The best and worst of me

And nothing changes between us

We will never stop growing closer

I will never stop loving you

You have all my trust, you have faith in me

You let me be the best I can be

With out you I could not be anything

Beautiful to anyone, nothing special in any way

With out you I would not be alive today

You really are my angel my savior

You say I am your AngeL

But in truth you gave me my wings

And with you I feel more than happy and wealthy

You are now and will always be

This worlds one true treasure

And I hope that you will always be mine

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Re: This Worlds One True Treasure (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:08:57 PM AEST
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awe, such a beautiful write, very heartfelt.

Re: This Worlds One True Treasure (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:27:30 PM AEST
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Lovely read John.

Filled with such emotion, straight from your loving heart. Well done, I'm sure she has looked at you and the seen the best. ;)

Dont doubt urself.

Re: This Worlds One True Treasure (User Rating: 1 )
by bgj on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:51:43 PM AEST
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Very nice! Good job.
bgj

Re: This Worlds One True Treasure (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 02:55:32 AM AEST
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wow!!!
Reaches out and grabs ya by the chest and proves true luv still exist on this planet.
A masterpeice as all your luvly writes to your girl.
big smiles,
emy

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