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Array ( [sid] => 10048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Fish [time] => 2003-01-09 08:20:00 [hometext] => This poem really doesn't have a classification. It's the story of an angler's fight with a fish. I think it's fun. Check it out. [bodytext] => Across the lake I started to look and with
nervous hope I baited my hook. A ripple I
spotted gave me a sign and in that direction
I cast out my line.

I waited for news with a smirk and great
zeal and was rewarded for it with a tug on
my reel. The fish flashed his size, "A
five footer I thought. He'd look great on
my wall if he ended up caught."

So I played with the fish as day passed into
night but he wouldn't go down no matter how
tough the fight. Finally I left it where it
had been. The fish won this round but he'd
see me again.

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The Fish

Contributed by olddarkme on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Across the lake I started to look and with
nervous hope I baited my hook. A ripple I
spotted gave me a sign and in that direction
I cast out my line.

I waited for news with a smirk and great
zeal and was rewarded for it with a tug on
my reel. The fish flashed his size, "A
five footer I thought. He'd look great on
my wall if he ended up caught."

So I played with the fish as day passed into
night but he wouldn't go down no matter how
tough the fight. Finally I left it where it
had been. The fish won this round but he'd
see me again.

Copyright © olddarkme ... [ 2003-01-09 08:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Fish (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:05:05 AM AEST
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Yeah the fish,
This is such an enjoyable read, you had me reeled in.
A good write I enjoyed the experience

Re: The Fish (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:25:20 AM AEST
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This poem has a great rhyme-scheme, yet you've written it out of line/stanza form. Which actually adds to the feeling of this being a story as well. Interesting approach, nice poem.

Re: The Fish (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:33:49 PM AEST
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Dear Olddarkme @-<<
*Ahh-hum* Don't you fishermen always have a five footer??? Ha! Maybe it was a log!
Great Write:)
Always Nessa

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