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Array ( [sid] => 100470 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => July Haze [time] => 2005-07-07 18:03:59 [hometext] => *I was listening to my Ataris CD earlier today and I liked how their stuff doesn't really rhyme. So I made this song with no intention of a rhyme scheme. I hope you all still like it though.* [bodytext] => *Verse 1*
Many summer days I've spent
Thinking about my life and what it all means
I stare at your picture on my desk
As I write songs of my summer
And I think of you
I think of you

*Chorus*
Everything seems so perfect
When we're free and we are living
Everythings in focus
When we forget all our problems
Our lives are spawning right before us
As we live in these summer days
And all of the memories we create
Are products of a July haze.

*Verse 2*
Walking down the street thinking of you
Dreaming of you
Looking in to your eyes I see my future
Ice cream is washed down with a Pepsi
And a kiss from you
A kiss from you

*Chorus*

*Verse 3*
545 Addison Dr.
I don't know when I'll see you again
So I think this hug and kiss might be just a little longer
A little longer
I don't want to say goodbye
No I'll never say goodbye

*Chorus*
*Chorus*

*Ending Verse*
So until we meet again
I will hold you in my heart
And never let you go
Never let you go
As long as I live
As long as I live

*Chorus* [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 34 [informant] => thepizzaguy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

July Haze

Contributed by thepizzaguy on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:03:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

*Verse 1*
Many summer days I've spent
Thinking about my life and what it all means
I stare at your picture on my desk
As I write songs of my summer
And I think of you
I think of you

*Chorus*
Everything seems so perfect
When we're free and we are living
Everythings in focus
When we forget all our problems
Our lives are spawning right before us
As we live in these summer days
And all of the memories we create
Are products of a July haze.

*Verse 2*
Walking down the street thinking of you
Dreaming of you
Looking in to your eyes I see my future
Ice cream is washed down with a Pepsi
And a kiss from you
A kiss from you

*Chorus*

*Verse 3*
545 Addison Dr.
I don't know when I'll see you again
So I think this hug and kiss might be just a little longer
A little longer
I don't want to say goodbye
No I'll never say goodbye

*Chorus*
*Chorus*

*Ending Verse*
So until we meet again
I will hold you in my heart
And never let you go
Never let you go
As long as I live
As long as I live

*Chorus*

Copyright © thepizzaguy ... [ 2005-07-07 18:03:59]
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Re: July Haze (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:09:16 PM AEST
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i liked this a whole lot. do u have a band do play it or are u in a band or something?
i REALLY want to like hear this on the radio and if its on cd i sooooo would get it. Awesoem song! rOCk On!!!!
luv, ~Kortnie~

Re: July Haze (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:05:03 PM AEST
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WOW!! This is awesome!! I can almost hear it in my mind... Great write..
Jenni

Re: July Haze (User Rating: 1 )
by Evshrug on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 03:03:23 AM AEST
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The mantra of the men who won't let go. Fortunately, she's just going home, not falling off a cliff.
It seems that the meaning or core idea is that if you can hold onto 545 Addison chick, you don't have to think about the meaning of your life, because you make your life about her. I think this is an interesting (post a comment if I'm overreading), because it sounds like a generally happy song, but you set the beginning up (and the chorus) to make it tinged with the feeling that the relationship is just smoke and mirrors covering a need to be needed and to feel like you are living life purposefully. Overall, I like it better than your other one (although you still have to drink your pepsi. Are they paying you?)
^_~

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