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Array ( [sid] => 100401 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Prison Tree [time] => 2005-07-07 02:03:46 [hometext] => Part 5 [bodytext] => She see's the monster waiting there
And gives him such a curious stare
Come on now you can't scare me
I'm a lady, can't you see

You can't bite off my sweet head
There are nicer things instead
I have some chocolate here to eat
And some cookies, what a treat

The monster looks in great surprise
He can't believe his bright green eyes
A lady who will show no fear
What a treasure he has here

Yes, I will share your tasty goods
So long since I found my tastebuds
You are a lady through and through
Green eyed monster does love you

I love you my monster dear
With flash and bang, a man appears
No more monster there to see
For the lady set him free

I will be your love for life
will you come and be my wife
No more jealousy for me
I can leave this prison tree

The morale of this tale you see
Leave behind the prison tree
If you feel envy has won
Green eyed monster you'll become

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 40 [informant] => gwenevere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
The Prison Tree

Contributed by gwenevere on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:03:46 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



She see's the monster waiting there
And gives him such a curious stare
Come on now you can't scare me
I'm a lady, can't you see

You can't bite off my sweet head
There are nicer things instead
I have some chocolate here to eat
And some cookies, what a treat

The monster looks in great surprise
He can't believe his bright green eyes
A lady who will show no fear
What a treasure he has here

Yes, I will share your tasty goods
So long since I found my tastebuds
You are a lady through and through
Green eyed monster does love you

I love you my monster dear
With flash and bang, a man appears
No more monster there to see
For the lady set him free

I will be your love for life
will you come and be my wife
No more jealousy for me
I can leave this prison tree

The morale of this tale you see
Leave behind the prison tree
If you feel envy has won
Green eyed monster you'll become





Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-07 02:03:46]
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Re: The Prison Tree (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:43:47 AM AEST
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You amaze me evyr day a little more Gwenevere. You should see about getting your work published. Top marks for one of my favourite subjects Dragons.


Re: The Prison Tree (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:27:57 PM AEST
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this one seemed a bit more juvenile than the others...not that that's a bad thing. i still enjoyed it though.

wizard


Re: The Prison Tree (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:18:37 PM AEST
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Woah... crazy. This is cool and so is the morale. It is true too. Well, you won't become a green-eyed monster, of course, but you will change. Nice write...
Jodi


Re: The Prison Tree (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:27:53 AM AEST
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I AM STANDING AND APPLAUDING YOUR you kept me so very interested and waiting in antisipation for each new part what a great write like a said before like watching a great movie with 5 parts and waiting in antisipation for the next on. Bravo this is incredible with such a great ending and a great moral to the story. I think I have dated a couple of those green monsters my self lol
Cathy




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