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Array ( [sid] => 100387 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => he loves her not [time] => 2005-07-07 00:08:47 [hometext] => about breaking up and all the pain that goes with it, plzzz comment [bodytext] => she walks in silence
with lonely fear
as her only love
bestowed a tear
a rose in her hand
and a crack in her heart
she missed him already
standing 2 feet apart
one last hug
the first goodbye
a lonely soul
with an intent cry
he leaves her broken
he leaves her astray
no more words
could bring the sunshin to a ray
a mind of shatering thoughts
with broken dreams
He loves her NOT [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => all_the_dead_roses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

he loves her not

Contributed by all_the_dead_roses on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:08:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

she walks in silence
with lonely fear
as her only love
bestowed a tear
a rose in her hand
and a crack in her heart
she missed him already
standing 2 feet apart
one last hug
the first goodbye
a lonely soul
with an intent cry
he leaves her broken
he leaves her astray
no more words
could bring the sunshin to a ray
a mind of shatering thoughts
with broken dreams
He loves her NOT

Copyright © all_the_dead_roses ... [ 2005-07-07 00:08:47]
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Re: he loves her not (User Rating: 1 )
by AfterLivingDeath on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST
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i really liked this one. and i can relate to it a lot. this has happened so many times. and i'm sure i'm not the only person here that understands exactly were ur coming from.
i love the way u wrote this. the rhyming is perfect and the way u wrote it u could see it preforming in your minds eye.
keep up the good work, u have a great talent.
~ALD~

Re: he loves her not (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFairyLove on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:43:40 PM AEST
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This poem was beautiful and I feel the pain you are relaying from it. I have known love and loss in my life and i know it isnt easy. Be true to yourself and the pain will go away, but the longer you hold it in the longer you will find it takes to find a love to fill its place....Thank you for gracing us with this beautiful read...Kayla

Re: he loves her not (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFairyLove on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:43:56 PM AEST
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This poem was beautiful and I feel the pain you are relaying from it. I have known love and loss in my life and i know it isnt easy. Be true to yourself and the pain will go away, but the longer you hold it in the longer you will find it takes to find a love to fill its place....Thank you for gracing us with this beautiful read...Kayla

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