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Array ( [sid] => 10038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => we'll see if your right [time] => 2003-01-09 05:00:00 [hometext] => to my special friend, thank you [bodytext] => you held me in a hug today
to ease my pain away
you tried your best to make me smile
you knew it was worth while
you gave kind words and tender ways
to make the pain go away
you know what I go through
for you have been there too
your unhappy to see me sad
so once again you try to make me glad
you say if I was your's you would treat me right
I hope so, we'll see if your right [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => princesspurty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

we'll see if your right

Contributed by princesspurty on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you held me in a hug today
to ease my pain away
you tried your best to make me smile
you knew it was worth while
you gave kind words and tender ways
to make the pain go away
you know what I go through
for you have been there too
your unhappy to see me sad
so once again you try to make me glad
you say if I was your's you would treat me right
I hope so, we'll see if your right

Copyright © princesspurty ... [ 2003-01-09 05:00:00]
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Re: we'll see if your right (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:58:14 AM AEST
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life is what we make of it ,,,and times will be better have faith and believe,,well written,,spooky

Re: we'll see if your right (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:40:23 PM AEST
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Friends are so important to have good write! Christina

Re: we'll see if your right (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:04:45 PM AEST
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Hey hey Dearie @-<<-
An excellent write here, a hugg says so much.. looks like more going on there.. my best to you, now forever & a day-(w/ gotta run something by you)
Love and woofies,
~Nessa~

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