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[aid] => mick
[title] => The world
[time] => 2005-07-06 18:46:43
[hometext] => Different for me, I think. This could have gone under so many topics, sad, inspirational, anguished, dedicated, emotional...so many. Comments or criticism welcome
[bodytext] => He took poetry from the world,
Weaving nature with his fingertips,
And making the pages beautiful.
And the words were his dreams,
And the paper was the script,
And the world was his stage.
And he was the lead, and --
He would breathe upon the stars,
To hide their shine,
When the night needed the dark.
And he'd dance in tune,
To the sounds of his thoughts,
As they made the darkness shine.
Until the sun would light,
Up the moments,
In which his pen really was alive.
As he took life from the world,
From his fingers to words.
And made the pages beautiful again.
For the words were his dreams,
And the paper was the script,
And the world was his stage.
And he was the lead, and --
No one saw him there...
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[counter] => 289
[topic] => 69
[informant] => lostinmyself
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => poets
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The world
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:46:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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He took poetry from the world,
Weaving nature with his fingertips,
And making the pages beautiful.
And the words were his dreams,
And the paper was the script,
And the world was his stage.
And he was the lead, and --
He would breathe upon the stars,
To hide their shine,
When the night needed the dark.
And he'd dance in tune,
To the sounds of his thoughts,
As they made the darkness shine.
Until the sun would light,
Up the moments,
In which his pen really was alive.
As he took life from the world,
From his fingers to words.
And made the pages beautiful again.
For the words were his dreams,
And the paper was the script,
And the world was his stage.
And he was the lead, and --
No one saw him there...
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2005-07-06 18:46:43]
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Re: The world
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:51:53 PM AEST
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omg this is incredible anything I would say would never do this justice bravo bravo
Michelle tips her head to your poetic verse so very lovely
Michelle |
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by demonika_911 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:58:07 PM AEST
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Well done...I got goosebumps reading this poem, very well written, keep it up!
Tel |
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:21:14 PM AEST
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This is brilliant, Philly. The emotions come through so well. Beautiful work.
Rita |
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Re: The world
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:33:40 PM AEST
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this was a great write
i truely enjoyed every word
nice |
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Re: The world
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:55:26 PM AEST
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OMG!! What an awesome write..... I loved it!!!!!
WOW!!
YOu have created a masterpiece here!!!
Jenni |
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Re: The world
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:39:57 PM AEST
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-Amazing write-
Very well written. Incredible thoughts indeed.
I enjoyed reading this
*claps* |
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Re: The world
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:27:21 PM AEST
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Well, this is pure beauty, Phil. It's wonderfully sensitive and poetic, with a hint of bittersweet about it. I love the way you've worded this - I'll surely be reading it again.
Slàinte!
Andrew |
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Re: The world
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by CarolinaBlue on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:31:56 AM AEST
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What an inspirational write full of so many different emotions. Absolutely stunning. Bravo!
~Blue~ |
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:13:11 AM AEST
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Oh God!!! That has to be the best poem i have read in weeks. My favorite author is writing again. Bless.
I loved this i really do, i am sorry though that you had to go through this. An amazing girl once told me to keep my head up even if im in my darkest days. I followed it and it kept me going.
Ok enough of my rablings, you really are an amazing poet Philly. Keep posting ok.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: The world
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:33:45 AM AEST
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Dearest Phil, your pen has yet again formed an artistic pallette on my screen! These words are so well formed that they flow like a gentle stream. They make sense and are filled with grand imagery that makes the mind captivated by it's tone. What a wonderful poem! Your talent never ceases to amaze me! (((phil)))
Angel always...joni |
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Re: The world
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:17:08 PM AEST
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This is velvet upon the heart, beautiful in so many ways phill, how ever u look at it it's a gem, a treasure 2 behold, dreamy and so
captivating, so enchanting, lovely as ever . . .
((((phill)))) Ben |
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Re: The world
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:38:28 PM AEST
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Oh, wow, Philomena.
I had no idea you'd come up with THIS out of that little snippet you sent me the other day. Brilliant! Brav-o!
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: The world
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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I don't know how well I understood this, but it made me sit up and take notice. It has been a joy to watch you blossom.
Stitch |
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Re: The world
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:28:33 PM AEST
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It appears to me to be a masterful write about a poet being a poet. The scope and format are ingenius with a wonderful flow, which is poetry. :)
This really is incredable, and very creative
This is truely a talented write, Phil
Will |
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Re: The world
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:53:41 AM AEST
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This would be yet another poem of yours that I don't feel worthy of commenting on.
You know what I think, and I feel that it's not necessary for me to say it.
~Jenna |
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Re: The world
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:04:03 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem. Rich, delicate and full of life, yet what a sad ending.......
It speaks volumes. |
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Re: The world
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:46:17 PM AEST
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A nice one but I'd like to know what inspired you to write this piece.
Well done,
Alex |
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