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And on the lock, there hung a spell
She spoke the words and was made small
To enter, she could not be tall

The golden key fit in it's place
The door opened with ease and grace
And as the lady stepped inside
she found the passage, long and wide

The door then closed with a loud thump
So loud it really made her jump
Now, how was she supposed to see
Down that long passage, in the tree

Then all at once from out the gloom
She heard a sound,a zing, a zoom
A million starlights showed the way
They were just fireflies, out to play

She clapped her hands with sheer delight
At that most amazing sight
But of course she didn't know
What was waiting, far below [comments] => 6 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 40 [informant] => gwenevere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

The Enchanted Passage

Contributed by gwenevere on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:29:20 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

She found the door, hidden so well
And on the lock, there hung a spell
She spoke the words and was made small
To enter, she could not be tall

The golden key fit in it's place
The door opened with ease and grace
And as the lady stepped inside
she found the passage, long and wide

The door then closed with a loud thump
So loud it really made her jump
Now, how was she supposed to see
Down that long passage, in the tree

Then all at once from out the gloom
She heard a sound,a zing, a zoom
A million starlights showed the way
They were just fireflies, out to play

She clapped her hands with sheer delight
At that most amazing sight
But of course she didn't know
What was waiting, far below

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-05 16:29:20]
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Re: The Enchanted Passage (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:51:36 PM AEST
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the plot thickens...can't wait for more.

wizard

Re: The Enchanted Passage (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:36:41 PM AEST
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very good write u should read some of my stuff.

Re: The Enchanted Passage (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:35:26 PM AEST
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Hmm seems like I missed something here... Interesting write...has me wanting moreeeeeeeee...
(I'll have to go look at parts 1 & 2)
Jenni

Re: The Enchanted Passage (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:51:21 PM AEST
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This, for me, is the best installment so far-

can't wait for 4-

B

Re: The Enchanted Passage (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:28:20 PM AEST
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These are great every time I read them. Too bad I am reading them backwards. Even with that I am so into them. These are great...
Jodi

Re: The Enchanted Passage (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:01:06 PM AEST
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wow you sure know how to write them waiting in antisipation for part 4 loved it so very much like watch in good movie keep them coming and I will keep reading
Cathy

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