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Array ( [sid] => 100202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost In Nature's Show [time] => 2005-07-05 15:48:00 [hometext] => Elegance in the simplest ways...pain in its beauty..freedom through its magic. [bodytext] => Crystal droplets descend from the sky,
Bringing my every pore alive,
Each taking a breath of rejuvenation.
My ears drown sweetly in the ocean’s
Singing waves
And heaven’s heartbeats.
Drop. Drop. Drop.
As they hit the floor they break,
Just as all hearts do.
In the magic of nature’s spell
I’m revived,
Finding lost breath through its touch.
My heartbeat lost in the pattern of their own,
Lost in the magic,
Lost in its song.
Transcended so many miles away from myself,
From anything that’s ever held me back.
My blood spinning from its ice cold caress,
Dancing to the pitter-patter of natures off beat melody.
I’m freed from earths gravity,
From my body’s weight,
From responsibilities,
I’m freed from the impossible.
The only promise held to me
Is the promise that
Those pitter-patter hearts
Breaking against the floor
Will one day be my own.
But until then natures angels welcome me
To their show of Life,
Where I become nothing but a whisper in its magic.


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Lost In Nature's Show

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:48:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



Crystal droplets descend from the sky,
Bringing my every pore alive,
Each taking a breath of rejuvenation.
My ears drown sweetly in the ocean’s
Singing waves
And heaven’s heartbeats.
Drop. Drop. Drop.
As they hit the floor they break,
Just as all hearts do.
In the magic of nature’s spell
I’m revived,
Finding lost breath through its touch.
My heartbeat lost in the pattern of their own,
Lost in the magic,
Lost in its song.
Transcended so many miles away from myself,
From anything that’s ever held me back.
My blood spinning from its ice cold caress,
Dancing to the pitter-patter of natures off beat melody.
I’m freed from earths gravity,
From my body’s weight,
From responsibilities,
I’m freed from the impossible.
The only promise held to me
Is the promise that
Those pitter-patter hearts
Breaking against the floor
Will one day be my own.
But until then natures angels welcome me
To their show of Life,
Where I become nothing but a whisper in its magic.






Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2005-07-05 15:48:00]
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Re: Lost In Nature's Show (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:54:55 PM AEST
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I "LOVED" this poem very great writing skills you have the frist line set the tone then the last line takes it home


Re: Lost In Nature's Show (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:26:01 PM AEST
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... And a beautiful nature poem of your own. The imagery and words are enchanting, as the best nature poetry should be. Well done!

Andrew


Re: Lost In Nature's Show (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:16:49 PM AEST
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The whole write was amazing..

(too many lines to quote)

you couldn't fit another ounce of imagery..
spectacular..
very well written piece.

B


Re: Lost In Nature's Show (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:46:20 PM AEST
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Excellent poem I loved it so serene so beautiful so breathtaking. YOur imagery sets such a clear picture as I read your marvelous words I am in awe
Cathy




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