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Array ( [sid] => 100201 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Dreams & Lies [time] => 2005-07-05 15:47:56 [hometext] => This is to my dad [bodytext] => Pull me up & out
Look into my eyes
Tell me what this is all about
All the broken dreams & lies
Why weren't you here?
What was more important than all this?
You never saw my tears
When it was you I missed
Do you even remember how I look?
Or have you forgotten it all?
Everytime you left, my smile you took
Again, to the ground I fall
Why can't you show you care?
Instead of always leaving
Just once can't you be there?
When I stop believeing [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 6 [informant] => living_dead_girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Broken Dreams & Lies

Contributed by living_dead_girl on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Pull me up & out
Look into my eyes
Tell me what this is all about
All the broken dreams & lies
Why weren't you here?
What was more important than all this?
You never saw my tears
When it was you I missed
Do you even remember how I look?
Or have you forgotten it all?
Everytime you left, my smile you took
Again, to the ground I fall
Why can't you show you care?
Instead of always leaving
Just once can't you be there?
When I stop believeing




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Re: Broken Dreams & Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:49:30 PM AEST
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alot of emotion and pain here. sorry about your dad but good job on the poem.


Re: Broken Dreams & Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:01:13 PM AEST
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I feel you 100% and feel for you all at once
We cant change others thoughts just be happy you know your father as for me i dont know mine. Very good job of expessing yourself and writing too


Re: Broken Dreams & Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 09:32:47 PM AEST
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how sad, i feel your pain in this poem




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