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Array ( [sid] => 100198 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wasting My Time [time] => 2005-07-05 15:21:32 [hometext] => The topic for this poem is actually angry/dedicated poetry. I dedicate this to a certain someone who I have been trying to ignore for months now and they just don't seem to get the #$%^&** idea! [bodytext] => Broken and frozen in time,
Lost and looking for rhyme,
Nothing’s here but my own pain.
My mind wonders through this rain.
My eyes travel the stars above.
My heart stopped beating for love.
Perceive this the way you will,
But listen, here’s the deal.
There’s only one way to find the truth.
And it’s in all of you.

Shocking the nation with the power within.
Broken and frozen in time, are you without sin?
I’m only here to live for one,
Now that this new venture has begun.
Burning my skin until it’s dry.
Why can’t you just see beyond his lie?
Are you that blind?
Are you too good for my kind?

Jumping on subjects, becoming discursive again.
My ways won’t change even with a loss, my friend.
I know why you’re here, and that’s why I want you to go.
You’ve destroyed every thing that I know.
Nothing means a thing.
Writing straight from the brain.
You thought the deeper you went, the deeper I’d crawl.
Well listen here, I’m not here to watch everyone fall.

Trying to start this new life,
With new hopes,
With new ideas,
With new friends,
With a new home,
With a new job,
With a life renewed.
And you just keep bringing me down.
Making be leaving a deep ground.
Get it, don’t smear it, don’t swear it, just leave it.
After 5 months, you’d think you’d get the idea.
But you’re still holding on!
I’m not going to do this again.
This is the last time I waste my time.
This is the last time I waste a rhyme. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Wasting My Time

Contributed by Bones on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Broken and frozen in time,
Lost and looking for rhyme,
Nothing’s here but my own pain.
My mind wonders through this rain.
My eyes travel the stars above.
My heart stopped beating for love.
Perceive this the way you will,
But listen, here’s the deal.
There’s only one way to find the truth.
And it’s in all of you.

Shocking the nation with the power within.
Broken and frozen in time, are you without sin?
I’m only here to live for one,
Now that this new venture has begun.
Burning my skin until it’s dry.
Why can’t you just see beyond his lie?
Are you that blind?
Are you too good for my kind?

Jumping on subjects, becoming discursive again.
My ways won’t change even with a loss, my friend.
I know why you’re here, and that’s why I want you to go.
You’ve destroyed every thing that I know.
Nothing means a thing.
Writing straight from the brain.
You thought the deeper you went, the deeper I’d crawl.
Well listen here, I’m not here to watch everyone fall.

Trying to start this new life,
With new hopes,
With new ideas,
With new friends,
With a new home,
With a new job,
With a life renewed.
And you just keep bringing me down.
Making be leaving a deep ground.
Get it, don’t smear it, don’t swear it, just leave it.
After 5 months, you’d think you’d get the idea.
But you’re still holding on!
I’m not going to do this again.
This is the last time I waste my time.
This is the last time I waste a rhyme.

Copyright © Bones ... [ 2005-07-05 15:21:32]
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Re: Wasting My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:41:47 PM AEST
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i thought this was clever, powerful and emotional. it was a very good write and i love the last two lines, great job.

Re: Wasting My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:45:50 PM AEST
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Very well thought out writing keep up the good work you now have a new fan

Re: Wasting My Time (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:38:07 PM AEST
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good write, i liked reading this one. and yes, there are always going to be people that try to drag you down, i am sorry to tell you. i know what it's like to have people who just don't understand it. i am sorry that you have to put up with this, but hey, it brought out a good write! keep up the good work and i wish you luck!

~sprints

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