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on....on....
As i watch
It goes away from me
I don't feel the pain anymore
How can it hurt me?
When i don't exist
I look upon life
With a new twist
I feel the numbness
Even though i don't survive
The people hear
Yet they only lie
How do i feel
When i am empty inside
I think of my death
As my life carries on
Not wishing for me
I know that it will end
Ending in eternity
It was eternal
It still will be
The pain flows through
It will never stop
Just as i see hope
The fear comes back again
eternal........... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Sexi_Lexi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

The Eternal Life

Contributed by Sexi_Lexi on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:36:16 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

The day goes on.
on....on....
As i watch
It goes away from me
I don't feel the pain anymore
How can it hurt me?
When i don't exist
I look upon life
With a new twist
I feel the numbness
Even though i don't survive
The people hear
Yet they only lie
How do i feel
When i am empty inside
I think of my death
As my life carries on
Not wishing for me
I know that it will end
Ending in eternity
It was eternal
It still will be
The pain flows through
It will never stop
Just as i see hope
The fear comes back again
eternal...........

Copyright © Sexi_Lexi ... [ 2005-07-05 06:36:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Eternal Life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:49:57 AM AEST
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dont lose your faith just hold on and push forward you will do fine this is very emotional write keep posting Ill keep reading
Michelle

Re: The Eternal Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:16:36 PM AEST
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Keep up your faith everything will work out.. nice poem .

butterflygirl40:)

Re: The Eternal Life (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:09:54 PM AEST
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i enjoyed your poem.

fear is not always a bad thing...it keeps us out of dangerous situations...

wizard

Re: The Eternal Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Belcha on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:12:07 AM AEST
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Never Fear Joey's Here !!

You certainly have a gift for understanding and sharing your emotional thoughts and feelings, keep up the good work.

peace, Joey B.

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