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I see the road you’re shifting towards.
And be thoroughly warned.
The road is only a dead end.

My friend, pay close attention.
Learn from my mistakes
You should know my heart aches
From the road’s end.

My friend, pay close attention.
You’re treading on ice.
Your judgment won’t suffice.
Your vision is distorted.

My friend, pay close attention.
The rejection of one
Should not drive you
To the arms of another

My friend, pay close attention.
I understand your pain
I’ve been there too
But you’re acting like a fool

My friend, pay close attention.
It’s a temporary attraction
A simple infatuation
It will pass with time

My friend, pay close attention
I beg of you wake up
Your rejection should not
Become your obsession

My friend, pay close attention
I’ll always be here for you
Even if you hit the dead end.
I’ll always be here, You’re friend

Scottmunster

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Pay Close Attention

Contributed by scottmunster on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:26:06 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

My friend, pay close attention.
I see the road you’re shifting towards.
And be thoroughly warned.
The road is only a dead end.

My friend, pay close attention.
Learn from my mistakes
You should know my heart aches
From the road’s end.

My friend, pay close attention.
You’re treading on ice.
Your judgment won’t suffice.
Your vision is distorted.

My friend, pay close attention.
The rejection of one
Should not drive you
To the arms of another

My friend, pay close attention.
I understand your pain
I’ve been there too
But you’re acting like a fool

My friend, pay close attention.
It’s a temporary attraction
A simple infatuation
It will pass with time

My friend, pay close attention
I beg of you wake up
Your rejection should not
Become your obsession

My friend, pay close attention
I’ll always be here for you
Even if you hit the dead end.
I’ll always be here, You’re friend

Scottmunster

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Re: Pay Close Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:25:46 AM AEST
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Very very good you are right 100% right pal rebounds never work .. If i got the meaning of this right or wrong P_MAIL me and let know
once again "GOOD WRITING" pal

Re: Pay Close Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:01:50 AM AEST
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Very nice poem! It is very hard to watch someone you care about making what you know to be a mistake. I really liked the way you ended the poem. :)

Jennifer

Re: Pay Close Attention (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:57:26 AM AEST
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you are a great friend this is a very loving poem sometimes though they are stubborn and dont see what we do looking from a distance I hope this person heeds your loving concern
Michelle

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