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Array ( [sid] => 10013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Shadows Of Tears [time] => 2003-01-08 20:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish I just could forget you
Today you've been on the mind
You're the most beautiful vision I have ever seen
I kinda lost the track of time
You never knew how much I loved you
One day you'll forget the sounds of my name
This sadness has pierced the soul
And nothing will ever be the same
Always knew it wasn't meant to be
Sometimes I see your face glistening across the shore
Still I wanna wish you only the best
I wonder if we'll see Heaven before they close the door
I'll probably never forget you
The ghost from your image drifts in my head
I'm crying to no one and no one is there
Never asked you to share my bed
Life without you is what I fear
No one can see these shadows of tears [comments] => 7 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 22 [informant] => LT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 39 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Shadows Of Tears

Contributed by LT on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I wish I just could forget you
Today you've been on the mind
You're the most beautiful vision I have ever seen
I kinda lost the track of time
You never knew how much I loved you
One day you'll forget the sounds of my name
This sadness has pierced the soul
And nothing will ever be the same
Always knew it wasn't meant to be
Sometimes I see your face glistening across the shore
Still I wanna wish you only the best
I wonder if we'll see Heaven before they close the door
I'll probably never forget you
The ghost from your image drifts in my head
I'm crying to no one and no one is there
Never asked you to share my bed
Life without you is what I fear
No one can see these shadows of tears

Copyright Â© LT ... [ 2003-01-08 20:40:00]
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Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:12:15 AM AEST
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This just overflows with sorrow. It is a beautiful poem.

Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by LT on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:30:44 AM AEST
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The words seem to jump from its page.
Well written.

Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST
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Brings back memories ... the pain of love is such a terrible thing.

I love the last line LT .. it's beautiful.

yours Kolbrún

Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:12:28 PM AEST
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Very real and graphic.
Nice use of words.

Lisa

Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 06:42:35 PM AEST
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I love the title, very good storyline.
Is this based on an actual event?

With loving a heart,
Carol Lynn

Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:07:46 PM AEST
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Very sad, but oh, so lovely.. I can relate to this is some ways.
Jenni

Re: Shadows Of Tears (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 07:01:31 PM AEST
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First time reading your work. I love how you express yourself. A sad love tale, that is well written.

Please write more.
Elaine

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