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So here we are
Contributed by
ducki
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 06:34:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Cockadoodledo said the Rooster to the Fly
The blood hits the floor
You close my eyes so I die
The blood hits the floor
Can you see the blood?
Can you see the floor?
Can you see me?
You see nothing
And the blood still hits the floor
Cockadoodledo
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ducki
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2005-07-04 18:34:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: So here we are
(User Rating: 1 ) by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:19:54 AM AEST (User
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a bit dark. i liked this as well.
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Re: So here we are
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:05:11 AM AEST (User
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you have a style all your
and its growing on me
i like this wrting it amazing |
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