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Array ( [sid] => 100093 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Past [time] => 2005-07-04 14:33:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My body born
So naive
Hidden away
So sweet
People would comment
Welcome comments
I was happy
Then you changed
The love and arms
Taken away to become
Fists and hands
Hands not for holding
But for striking
I look to others for care
Rejection in every stare
Reaching out, no one came
People would comment
Unwelcome comments
I changed inside
And out, hoping for it to end
Didnt anyone see me
Didnt anyone see me as a person
And not as a ragdoll?
Was that all i was
Neglected
Rejected
Becomes so familiar
Angry words, volume high
Killinh me piece by piece
The pain numbing
From the real pain inside
I'm like a muesuem
For my old life
So much has changed
So much is left
I am the proof
Of total abuse
Look into my eyes
You'll see it
Replaying again and
Again in my mind
It haunts me
These memories dont fade
No sleep, all nightmares
Plagues my mind all day and night
When do i stop?

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The Past

Contributed by harlot20 on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:33:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My body born
So naive
Hidden away
So sweet
People would comment
Welcome comments
I was happy
Then you changed
The love and arms
Taken away to become
Fists and hands
Hands not for holding
But for striking
I look to others for care
Rejection in every stare
Reaching out, no one came
People would comment
Unwelcome comments
I changed inside
And out, hoping for it to end
Didnt anyone see me
Didnt anyone see me as a person
And not as a ragdoll?
Was that all i was
Neglected
Rejected
Becomes so familiar
Angry words, volume high
Killinh me piece by piece
The pain numbing
From the real pain inside
I'm like a muesuem
For my old life
So much has changed
So much is left
I am the proof
Of total abuse
Look into my eyes
You'll see it
Replaying again and
Again in my mind
It haunts me
These memories dont fade
No sleep, all nightmares
Plagues my mind all day and night
When do i stop?

Copyright © harlot20 ... [ 2005-07-04 14:33:27]
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Re: The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by bgj on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 03:10:41 PM AEST
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Such feeling and emotion. Good job.
bgj

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