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Array ( [sid] => 100083 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wonderful is Natural [time] => 2005-07-04 12:35:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The waterfall rises and then
Splits into equal fractions
Falls on my back
In a cold yet unremorseful satisfaction

A particle floats on a current of air
A cotton candy texture, with minerals
That provides it with care, and the power to glide
Right into my hands,
To hold it, make my wish, and then blow it
Across the moon
Right into your hands

The most beautiful, of dead,
Brown, rusted leafs,
Falls slowly from the oak, from a
Branch hidden among the cloak,
Among the red robbin’s nest,
Where the seedlings are soaked,
To perfection by the rain,
Protection from the blaze,
The shade, guides the leaf
Down the thorny, prickly, maze

A wondrous day to take a long walk
A ponderous feeling, not having to say a word
Never having to talk
Juts enjoying the surroundings, relishing
In unique findings, so much promising
That nature does not deny us

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Wonderful is Natural

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:35:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The waterfall rises and then
Splits into equal fractions
Falls on my back
In a cold yet unremorseful satisfaction

A particle floats on a current of air
A cotton candy texture, with minerals
That provides it with care, and the power to glide
Right into my hands,
To hold it, make my wish, and then blow it
Across the moon
Right into your hands

The most beautiful, of dead,
Brown, rusted leafs,
Falls slowly from the oak, from a
Branch hidden among the cloak,
Among the red robbin’s nest,
Where the seedlings are soaked,
To perfection by the rain,
Protection from the blaze,
The shade, guides the leaf
Down the thorny, prickly, maze

A wondrous day to take a long walk
A ponderous feeling, not having to say a word
Never having to talk
Juts enjoying the surroundings, relishing
In unique findings, so much promising
That nature does not deny us

____________
_______

Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-07-04 12:35:54]
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Re: Wonderful is Natural (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:58:02 PM AEST
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A beautifull poem, crawled into heart, was able to picture all of the images. SLipSiX.

Re: Wonderful is Natural (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 03:45:27 PM AEST
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awwww jyss, I found myself sitting in the park under an oak tree blowing milkweed seeds into the air like I did when I was little...great write!

~Blue~

Re: Wonderful is Natural (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 03:54:06 PM AEST
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Hmmm I don't necessarily think of nostalgia when I read this...More quiet solitude...Finding peace in yourself, and not taking the simple pleasures for granted...I enjoyed the feel of this write, and the fine detail throughout.

Scorp.

Re: Wonderful is Natural (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:17:03 PM AEST
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Your writing is so good
I always read your writes
But without the comment its like hitting a homerun and only going to 1st base.

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