Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 11:59:35 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 100077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Whisper [time] => 2005-07-04 11:06:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What can be said?
The trees sway so elegantly with the wind
And the mountains are embraced with the setting sun
So comfortable it all seems
Yet still like a wraith do I feel
Gliding endlessly across the lands with eyes of dreams
Well if I thought to have known its all been leveled
Lays broken around my feet
I am waiting with no thought left
Stolen with the depression of my suffering
I can not say what is real and what lives
What dies, bleeding to the carpet once so white
Before I came to stand in this place
And the moon promises to be beautiful this evening
Does that mean you will come once again
Steal this insanity that beckons at my door with
The murmurs of day time routine
(All that continues to endure)
Pride and beauty mean nothing in this enchantment I twirl
Around in fingers to stiff with typing the same words
In different ways
Well it’s the block that calls forth the anger
The stillness of the flow that demands the drink
What do you think now as your whisper grows
Pushing against the window like a kiss of suspense
I wish I knew if I was losing what grasp I had
But so it remains as the crazy torment of what I
Crave is smeared once again here
In metaphors and psychedelic dreams
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 73 [informant] => TheTimeOf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
The Whisper

Contributed by TheTimeOf on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:06:30 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



What can be said?
The trees sway so elegantly with the wind
And the mountains are embraced with the setting sun
So comfortable it all seems
Yet still like a wraith do I feel
Gliding endlessly across the lands with eyes of dreams
Well if I thought to have known its all been leveled
Lays broken around my feet
I am waiting with no thought left
Stolen with the depression of my suffering
I can not say what is real and what lives
What dies, bleeding to the carpet once so white
Before I came to stand in this place
And the moon promises to be beautiful this evening
Does that mean you will come once again
Steal this insanity that beckons at my door with
The murmurs of day time routine
(All that continues to endure)
Pride and beauty mean nothing in this enchantment I twirl
Around in fingers to stiff with typing the same words
In different ways
Well it’s the block that calls forth the anger
The stillness of the flow that demands the drink
What do you think now as your whisper grows
Pushing against the window like a kiss of suspense
I wish I knew if I was losing what grasp I had
But so it remains as the crazy torment of what I
Crave is smeared once again here
In metaphors and psychedelic dreams




Copyright © TheTimeOf ... [ 2005-07-04 11:06:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:09:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very nice write....I enjoyed reading it..
God Bless!


Re: The Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by TheTimeOf on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:51:53 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
it's been awhile since i looked over these old poems!! thank you for leaving your thoughts- it is always nice to know that your words can stir some emotion or image to life.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com