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My tired mind does fly
Once rosy love, now charred to black
I realize I believed in a white lie

Misled? No. Mistaken? Yes.
By what I thought was real
Shutting down, feels I've failed a test
I need some time to heal

Heart of glass, encased in ice
Reinforced with bars of steel
Emotionally stagnant, I pay the price
A heavy fine for what I feel

I have loved you for a life time
But worry for me no more
I will not rob you of your prime
Just gently close the door.
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Pipe Dreams

Contributed by Tanna on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Over the moon on a dragons back
My tired mind does fly
Once rosy love, now charred to black
I realize I believed in a white lie

Misled? No. Mistaken? Yes.
By what I thought was real
Shutting down, feels I've failed a test
I need some time to heal

Heart of glass, encased in ice
Reinforced with bars of steel
Emotionally stagnant, I pay the price
A heavy fine for what I feel

I have loved you for a life time
But worry for me no more
I will not rob you of your prime
Just gently close the door.

Copyright © Tanna ... [ 2003-01-08 18:20:00]
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Re: Pipe Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by PrEtTy-PlEaSe on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:35:07 PM AEST
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wow! intense yet real...i love it...i guess because i went through the same thing...beautifully written and i just love the expression about over the moon n on a dragons back....we all tend to 'over think' a little but hey! thats what makes us human eh?! lemme go read it again

Re: Pipe Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:38:08 PM AEST
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sometimes its best to close the door,,sometimes its bestto look forward for there someone in await,,,well written,,,spooky

Re: Pipe Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:57:45 PM AEST
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This is awesome! The very first line drew me in, and I was hooked from there. This is beautiful! Amazing write!

~ MoonlitAngel

Re: Pipe Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Olddarkme on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 07:23:18 PM AEST
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Kind of hit and miss to me. I didn't like the first stanza. A dragon's back? And a tired mind wouldn't do much flying. The middle two stanzas are ok and I really liked the last stanza.

Re: Pipe Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:22:46 PM AEST
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Dear Tanna @-<<-
A Beautiful and Wonderful Write my friend, thank you for sharing this..
Always Nessa

Re: Pipe Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:36:22 PM AEST
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I found your poems! The link from the messaging system must not work the same as the others. I must say, this one is very good. Some great descriptions in this one, and feeling galore. Nice job!

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