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I will always be true
I want to stay up late with you
Looking up at the sky
Under your wings till the sun was high

I want to walk with you
Hand in hand until today turned into tomorrow
Till I am no longer full of sorrow

I want to be with you
Till the end of time
I will be forever yours will you be mine

Then I will leave you
Just to come back and see
That sad look in your eyes when you miss me
But I will never let you cry
One tear from you and I would die

I want to lay with you
In my bed and watch you sleep
As the light from the sun starts to slowly creep
I wan to kiss you and be kissed
To feel our souls join as one in eternal bliss
I want to be with you as lovers are
And shine upon the world like the brightest star

You are what I can’t live without
To you I am forever devout
I build my church in your heart
I knew I loved you from the very start
Our bond is something that nothing can bend
And I will love you till the very end

I will always be true
I want to stay up late with you
Looking up at the sky
Under your wings till the sun was high

If I fell asleep
Would you watch over me?
Or meet me in my world of dreams
And flow with me on a star made stream

I want to be with you as lovers are
But you are more to me by far
You are everything to me
That is how you will always be
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True, Devout, Eternal

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I will always be true
I want to stay up late with you
Looking up at the sky
Under your wings till the sun was high

I want to walk with you
Hand in hand until today turned into tomorrow
Till I am no longer full of sorrow

I want to be with you
Till the end of time
I will be forever yours will you be mine

Then I will leave you
Just to come back and see
That sad look in your eyes when you miss me
But I will never let you cry
One tear from you and I would die

I want to lay with you
In my bed and watch you sleep
As the light from the sun starts to slowly creep
I wan to kiss you and be kissed
To feel our souls join as one in eternal bliss
I want to be with you as lovers are
And shine upon the world like the brightest star

You are what I can’t live without
To you I am forever devout
I build my church in your heart
I knew I loved you from the very start
Our bond is something that nothing can bend
And I will love you till the very end

I will always be true
I want to stay up late with you
Looking up at the sky
Under your wings till the sun was high

If I fell asleep
Would you watch over me?
Or meet me in my world of dreams
And flow with me on a star made stream

I want to be with you as lovers are
But you are more to me by far
You are everything to me
That is how you will always be

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-07-03 23:15:31]
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Re: True, Devout, Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:23:18 PM AEST
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before any one saids anyone here hear i know

Re: True, Devout, Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:22:06 AM AEST
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So u know what?
Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: True, Devout, Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:33:32 AM AEST
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This would make a beautiful song.

Lovely sentiments john, warmed my heart indeed. ;)

Re: True, Devout, Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:06:44 AM AEST
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John this is beautiful, i melted when i read it and it fits the song perfectly. you are the master of words, muaw.

Re: True, Devout, Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:12:59 AM AEST
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And it almost sounds like something Amy and Company would write.

Re: True, Devout, Eternal (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:13:21 AM AEST
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And it almost sounds like something Amy and Company would write.

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