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Array ( [sid] => 100006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => flower flying with souls [time] => 2005-07-03 19:16:58 [hometext] => i was in a thinking mood :-) [bodytext] => Flower flower in my hand
where will you go?
where will you land?
will you fly or will you fall?
will you make it anywhere at all?

You sit so delicately on my skin

and i think

I think about me, myself and my mind

I think about life, where will i go? what will i see?

Where will you go, what will you see,
when i softly set you free?

Will another wandering soul take you and think...

...think about them, themselves and their mind...

...think about life, where they will go and what they will see?

just like me.

Will they wonder who i am, who set you free?

Or will they simply gaze upwards to your similarities

...and wonder why just one flower fell?

Flower flower in someone's hand
Where did you go? Where did you land?
Did you fly or did you fall?
Did you make it anywhere at all?

Does somebody think like me?
Does somebody think of me?

Will somebody else set you free?
to fly, to travel, to feel, to see

Will you fly and fly and see
and meet other souls

just like me? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 14 [informant] => 8kiwi8 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
flower flying with souls

Contributed by 8kiwi8 on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 07:16:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Flower flower in my hand
where will you go?
where will you land?
will you fly or will you fall?
will you make it anywhere at all?

You sit so delicately on my skin

and i think

I think about me, myself and my mind

I think about life, where will i go? what will i see?

Where will you go, what will you see,
when i softly set you free?

Will another wandering soul take you and think...

...think about them, themselves and their mind...

...think about life, where they will go and what they will see?

just like me.

Will they wonder who i am, who set you free?

Or will they simply gaze upwards to your similarities

...and wonder why just one flower fell?

Flower flower in someone's hand
Where did you go? Where did you land?
Did you fly or did you fall?
Did you make it anywhere at all?

Does somebody think like me?
Does somebody think of me?

Will somebody else set you free?
to fly, to travel, to feel, to see

Will you fly and fly and see
and meet other souls

just like me?




Copyright © 8kiwi8 ... [ 2005-07-03 19:16:58]
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Re: flower flying with souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:55:40 PM AEST
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Amazing what a little contemplation can do!


Re: flower flying with souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:50:20 AM AEST
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intresting and creative way to think about life, great write.


Re: flower flying with souls (User Rating: 1 )
by 8kiwi8 on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 08:06:30 AM AEST
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thankyou :-) i havn't been writing anything for a while i thought i'd totally lost it then that just came into my head lol




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