I quietly step into the peaceful haven
Alone, with no wretched soul to harm me
My dress of plain white silk brushed the white stone floor
Eyes of deep angelic blue look around this place of beauty
Lovely, white doves circle around the precious moon
Tall, pure white arches hang over me
Emerald green ivy coils through them
Perfect blood red roses grow among the speared fences
White lily’s sway in the cold, welcoming wind
The shimmering moon blankets the flowers in an everlasting hold
I follow the turning path hoping to find an answer
A clear answer to unlock my wandering, lonesome heart
The capturing, silver stars hoard the ravishing night
A haunting, bleak song intervenes my miserable spirit
My lingering spirit breaks from it’s harrowing keep
I think to myself, I’m confined to wander this planet alone
The gleaming moon rises into the blinding unknown
Darkness entraps me, pulling me into a black hell
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Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1) by Blaze on Wednesday, December 31 2003 @ 20:28:56 AEST (User Info | Send a Message)
I hear ya.
Awesome work of art!
Best New Year ever, peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy
Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1) by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, January 01 2004 @ 05:57:37 AEST (User Info | Send a Message | Journal)
This absolutely obliterates any notion of beauty I previously had. I am awe-struck. One of the best i've read in a long time, I love your style so much.
Truly (and still stunned),
-V.S.
Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1) by alixia12 on Thursday, January 01 2004 @ 06:06:48 AEST (User Info | Send a Message | Journal)
i thought ur poem Moonlit Garden was very heartfelt and beautiful.I know its hard to understand the choices you make and where they would take you.You soon will understand that the things you've done have a reason for being.But your not alone you will find someone and when you do you'll regret ever thinking they weren't there.
Re: - Moonlit Garden - (User Rating: 1) by justjonesy on Wednesday, November 10 2004 @ 02:37:21 AEST (User Info | Send a Message)
Very good imagry...you write like a artist paints....i love the style
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