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Sticks & Stones
Contributed by JakerBaker88 on Thursday, July 29 2010 @ 20:45:44 AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry
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How words can hurt.
Good intentions count little,
Especially the humorous kind
For in my witty banter,
You mistook my rhyme;
You cut me down to size,
Ridiculed our friendship---
Broke the smile that was mine
And walked away triumphant,
While I remained silent----
Left far behind.
Copyright © JakerBaker88 ... [2010-07-29 20:45:44]
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Re: Sticks & Stones (User Rating: 1)
by DrcGaimer on Friday, July 30 2010 @ 12:19:07 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Indeed, nice piece. Loved the line "broke the smile that was mine". |
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Re: Sticks & Stones (User Rating: 1)
by Sushila on Friday, July 30 2010 @ 08:30:20 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Misconceptions and misinterpretations can hurt when in actual truth no one was meant to be. You have captured the misery of being misunderstood very well in this poem. Well wirtten. |
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Re: Sticks & Stones (User Rating: 1)
by thebadguy9999 on Saturday, July 31 2010 @ 03:56:08 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | nice |
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Re: Sticks & Stones (User Rating: 1)
by yvonxsmeets (yvonsmeets@hotmail.com) on Sunday, August 01 2010 @ 13:13:36 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Nice piece of writing
well done |
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Re: Sticks & Stones (User Rating: 1)
by Pat346 on Friday, August 06 2010 @ 09:47:11 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Short and to the point. Love it. |
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