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VASTNESS OF ETERNITY
Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, May 04 2010 @ 12:07:11 AEST
Topic: 0oops No Topic - General Poetry!
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Just thinking.
The stars tell stories of long ago
Spreading light on mysteries to find.
They speak not one little word.
They twinkle every where and shine.
Ahh the vastness of eternity
blows my Earthly brain.
Our vessel only here for a time.
Simple humanness can't obtain.
We'll get a new body each time.
This one will die and fade.
Don't know 'bout your beliefs
But miracles exist in life's parade.
Eternity has no end, see?
Now that's a wonder to obtain,
Each new day our lives brand new.
A beginning our victory still remains.
So I'll shout, there's no end.
Just look at heavens beauty above
He'll give us a brand new body.
Let go of hatred, tune into love.
Copyright © emystar ... [2010-05-04 12:07:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by elle (im.age@cox.net) on Tuesday, May 04 2010 @ 12:13:54 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message | Journal) | | A beautiful message. . . elle :) |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Nevilleconnie on Tuesday, May 04 2010 @ 14:30:54 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | A very beautiful poem, with a beautiful message. A lovely read. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, May 04 2010 @ 17:07:26 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | You rock with this poem, Grrlfriend... Great message here....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by aliopterix (almuir.muir@googlemail.com) on Wednesday, May 05 2010 @ 02:10:54 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | So full of hope for the future, very beautiful. Aliopterix. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by spud on Wednesday, May 05 2010 @ 04:55:45 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Hi Emy,
''Let go of hatred, tune into love.'' Like it!
Tommy
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by lovingcritters on Thursday, May 06 2010 @ 18:08:21 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Ahhhhhhhhh Emy this poem could go on forever and ever............
Tune into love, and hate never
Great job
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on Sunday, May 30 2010 @ 13:40:31 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Thanks for commenting on my poem. I thought I'd check out yours. I like the contrast of the conversational, easy-going tone with the weighty topic. Overall it's pretty awesome :)
-Anne-Marie |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, June 05 2010 @ 22:50:56 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | there you go again
with a classic flow
oh
you are the best. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Potpourri on Friday, July 02 2010 @ 11:30:02 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | as always most intriguing,
lovely write my friend . . .
Potpourri
ty 4 visiting my page. |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Elizabeth_Dandy (wabbit37@optonline.net) on Saturday, July 17 2010 @ 15:00:47 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Dearest Emy!
I am profoundly stirred by the beauty , depth and luminosity of this wonderful poem.
Somethig to lift up the soul and nourish it.
Thanks for this remarkable and inspiring work. of art. and devotion
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All my love
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Spike (boldasbrass@woohoo.com.au) on Sunday, July 18 2010 @ 05:28:32 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | from the heart indeed - beauty, change, regeneration - and always, hope. Nice one.
Spike |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by spud on Friday, July 23 2010 @ 11:52:28 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Hi Emystar,
Reminds me of when I was a boy and I first tried
to imagine 'Eternity.' In a child's mind everything
has an end - the lollilop you hoped would last for
ever is gone in 30 minutes, the ice-cream that
starts to melt no matter how long you try to make
it last, etc... etc... - so eternity in the hereafter
was just not within the realms of my understanding.
I still struggle but the older I get the more 'Hope'
I store away.
A lovely piece of poetry, and much to ponder.
Tommy
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by 143 on Saturday, July 24 2010 @ 07:30:24 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | How I enjoy your writting!
WOW, TOTALLY STRESSFREE!
SO AWESOME EMY, WOW!!!
GREAT,GREAT!
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, July 27 2010 @ 14:38:12 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Great style and some interesting thoughts thrown in for good measure too.
Makes you wonder about life in general.We are all just dots in time in the great map of eternity.
Steve |
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Re: VASTNESS OF ETERNITY (User Rating: 1)
by Potpourri on Wednesday, August 11 2010 @ 19:08:52 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | As always emy beautiful and
inspiering work, your right up
there with the best of them . . .
ty 4 visiting my page and commenting.
Potpourri
aka.u know who,
((((emy)))) |
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