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Do I Seem Insane To You
Contributed by enigma on Tuesday, November 08 2005 @ 07:41:50 AEST
Topic: Psychotic Poems
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...I had fun writing this one...
Do I Seem Insane To You?
My precious daughters...
little girls...
sweethearts...
Daddy's little ones...
do I seem insane to you?
Think.
Think hard.
Think really hard.
Recall.
Consider all.
Spare no sequestered thought.
Do I seem a little off the mark to you?
Compare my actions with those this world esteems...
reflect on all you have seen of me...
recall all the stupidities...
ponder each and every idiotic notion that has ever wafted gently from my brow...
think...
think...
think...
remember all,
and tell me in truth...
with no consideration of proprietary responses...
think...
Do I seem insane to you?
I most certainly hope so.
November 7, 2005
rko
Copyright © enigma ... [2005-11-08 07:41:50]
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Re: Do I Seem Insane To You (User Rating: 1)
by onedysturbdchick on Wednesday, November 09 2005 @ 04:16:23 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | wow...this one really hit me....i grew up with a manic depressive father, and i got that question from him quite a bit. and the thing of it is, is he says he wouldn't want to be any other way. so, i really loved this poem. beautiful....... |
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Re: Do I Seem Insane To You (User Rating: 1)
by MidnightSkys on Tuesday, November 08 2005 @ 08:10:37 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Well, if mistakes and actions that would be frowned upon by society's perspective make's one insane, I guess I'm in the club lol. Very interesting write, I don't have kids, I'm still fairly young, but I guess I could understand how that question would make it's way to surface. I like the rather random format, and a really enjoyable tone. Was a pleasure to read, and hope to see more soon.
-Cassy |
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Re: Do I Seem Insane To You (User Rating: 1)
by PLformalyknownasPpaul on Tuesday, November 08 2005 @ 09:02:53 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I think insanity or at least eccentricity is a virtue that our society to often unfairly ingnores. Were all a little crazy. The world would be deadly dull if we wern't! Embrace your kookyness! |
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Re: Do I Seem Insane To You (User Rating: 1)
by poisonpen00ad on Tuesday, November 08 2005 @ 20:39:15 AEST
(User Info | Send a Message) | Good work, I love insanity.
C. |
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