Just a question
Date: Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 03:20:18 AM AEST Topic: Sad Poetry
Contributed By: Libertina
Just a question
Hello my dear fellows from YPCD
I have to admit there´s a question in me
Before all- I know that this poem is bad
But it should be nothing else- so, mates, don´t be too sad
It´s just that I needed a way to complain
About certain comments
(They´re really a shame)
They´re saying: 'Thumbs up', or 'Damn cool', or 'Hell yeah'
They beam 'Wonderful', or 'Awesome' or' Take care'
The claim you the master- yes, these were all quotes!
BUT
What happens to you when you look at the votes?
Expecting a "good"- having four stars in mind?
And finding just two- what´s the meaning behind
'Thumbs 'up after all when you find it undone
Without any help to just get where it´s gone?
Damn hell, I won´t demonize critics at all
I myself do write them, accept them, and call
For them every time that I face such events
As described above, or similar incidents
And I wonder, my God, is it really so hard
To tell what´s gone wrong- and if not- give reward
As every living poet needs to know where he stands
So please, dearest fellows, write useful comments!
With one smiling and one dropping eye
Libertina
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