Array ( [sid] => 156421 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beautiful Oblivious [time] => 2010-01-01 17:02:08 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was 16. This is my first submisson. Criticism is appreciated. [bodytext] => She who they all admire,
They all hate.
She is comfortable wherever she sits,
With a secret vulnerability so subtle,
Only a very wise man could see.
Or woman.
She is passionate like no other,
And never is she dramatic.
Sometimes,
She sits in a world so far away,
You cannot hold a conversation,
Yet, you admire
How uninhibited she always is.
She's loud,
As the muscles of her face
Tighten and pull into her unique expression.
Silent, yes,
But no one can ignore her presence.
Her skin,
Although sun-spotted and blemished,
It glows.
She laughs,
And everyone in earshot cracks a smile.
Her eyes,
Although glazed,
Sparkle.
With wise wrinkles,
And beauty like no other,
She's confident.
And she never lets you see her cry.
And she is never afraid of her dark side.
She's been through enough
To keep her cool
As hot as Hell can be.
She's what everyone wants to be,
Or be with.
She means the world to everyone -
She has not a clue.
What they love
Is what makes her alone.
And as loved as she is,
Without a clue,
She doesn't care at all. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lovesheir420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract ) Your Poetry Dot Com - Beautiful Oblivious


Beautiful Oblivious
Date: Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:02:08 PM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry


Contributed By: lovesheir420

She who they all admire,
They all hate.
She is comfortable wherever she sits,
With a secret vulnerability so subtle,
Only a very wise man could see.
Or woman.
She is passionate like no other,
And never is she dramatic.
Sometimes,
She sits in a world so far away,
You cannot hold a conversation,
Yet, you admire
How uninhibited she always is.
She's loud,
As the muscles of her face
Tighten and pull into her unique expression.
Silent, yes,
But no one can ignore her presence.
Her skin,
Although sun-spotted and blemished,
It glows.
She laughs,
And everyone in earshot cracks a smile.
Her eyes,
Although glazed,
Sparkle.
With wise wrinkles,
And beauty like no other,
She's confident.
And she never lets you see her cry.
And she is never afraid of her dark side.
She's been through enough
To keep her cool
As hot as Hell can be.
She's what everyone wants to be,
Or be with.
She means the world to everyone -
She has not a clue.
What they love
Is what makes her alone.
And as loved as she is,
Without a clue,
She doesn't care at all.

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