Array ( [sid] => 130033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => so far gone [time] => 2007-01-01 23:08:24 [hometext] => this is the first poem that I've submitted, I was angry and I just put a bunch of words that I had written down together so it's a little choppy but thats why I liked it! please leave your comments so I can see how I did for my first time! [bodytext] => everything falling so fast
everyday something new
try to take it in
drag me under with this pain
I need a cure
thoughts of you so far away
whats best for me is nothing unsure
emptiness fills the mirror
looking for that past reflection
not like you were
losing everything, lost inside
torn, hurt, sick, numb
turning to stone as you stare off
coldness fills, runs through my veins
trapped inside and nobody cares
fading slowly, I need you...
the bottle almost gone, forget pain
anger, darkness, silence
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so far gone
Date: Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 11:08:24 PM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: brokensky
everything falling so fast
everyday something new
try to take it in
drag me under with this pain
I need a cure
thoughts of you so far away
whats best for me is nothing unsure
emptiness fills the mirror
looking for that past reflection
not like you were
losing everything, lost inside
torn, hurt, sick, numb
turning to stone as you stare off
coldness fills, runs through my veins
trapped inside and nobody cares
fading slowly, I need you...
the bottle almost gone, forget pain
anger, darkness, silence
are you happy that you changed?

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