|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Come...Join Me...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:13:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
|
Come...Join Me...
Your body is a temple where my desires come to pray
For sweet release of flowing nectar,as with ecstasy we play
Look deep into these lust filled eyes as I'm riding there above
Feel my body quivering when its filled with your sweet love
We dance in rhythmic flowing motion as our bodies become one
Tease me with your dreamy eyes,feel the juices run
Feed desires hunger that tingles between my thighs
Take my breast into your mouth and feel my wetness sigh
Let your senses know me as your hands so know my skin
Swim in my well of passion as I deeply breathe you in
Feel my warmth surround you,as you thrust into its depths
Awaken all my fantasies that for so long now have slept
I will give myself completely for your love has made me whole
Come with me now and find yourself, as you penetrate my soul
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
... [
2003-07-04 21:13:51]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:57:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hmmm..now I'm sure he couldn't resist an offer like this...*wink*
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 10:15:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow. That was like... wow... damn. You're good, lol.
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 08:22:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| sensual.... im all tingly mmmmmmmm ~Apryl |
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 05:09:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Excellent...venkat |
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful poem. I love it. I wish I could write like you do. I love it
~Stacie~ |
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:24:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| dearest sharon, you are by far the most sensuous writers of erotic poetry i know, in the classiest way possible, always your words just flow with a life n' breath of their own, and i love this one too, because when loving it needs to be with love and truely in soul:) hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Re: Come...Join Me...
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 04:33:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Oh damn that was so, hot, loving, erotic, filled with loving passion. WoW Is all I can think of right now. Ecellent! You deserve 5 thumbs up. |
|
|
|
 Poem Rating
|
Average Score: 19
Votes: 4
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
