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Array ( [sid] => 98396 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Note [time] => 2005-06-17 17:29:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If it comes before I wake up
Please God let someone
find this note
and send it to
someone who can
help...
I tried the antidote
it didn't work...
Theres something missing...
The sky looks wrong
The ocean is blood red
I can see the shadows
Lord, the shadows!
It isn't what we thought...
It's nothing like we thought!
The eyes...
So many...
So dark
So cold
The screaming...
please
If you
Find this
Please tell someone
Tell them
To warn
them
Tell
Them
To
Warn
Everyone...

Its coming...

...
...
...
...

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 564 [topic] => 53 [informant] => ForeverAndADay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => scifi )
The Note

Contributed by ForeverAndADay on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic: scifi



If it comes before I wake up
Please God let someone
find this note
and send it to
someone who can
help...
I tried the antidote
it didn't work...
Theres something missing...
The sky looks wrong
The ocean is blood red
I can see the shadows
Lord, the shadows!
It isn't what we thought...
It's nothing like we thought!
The eyes...
So many...
So dark
So cold
The screaming...
please
If you
Find this
Please tell someone
Tell them
To warn
them
Tell
Them
To
Warn
Everyone...

Its coming...

...
...
...
...





Copyright © ForeverAndADay ... [ 2005-06-17 17:29:22]
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Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 06:34:23 PM AEST
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ForeverANDADAY

Different
I gave a 3
Just because
I didn't know
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"WHATS--------COMING ! ? ? ? ?

Sinned


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:09:59 PM AEST
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it was good, but unclear


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:38:39 PM AEST
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this does leave you wondering what is coming.....is there going to be a part 2 to this......a good suspense poem thoughI give you a 3 for effort


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:14:08 PM AEST
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what is exactly coming? i would like to know... it was a questioning and suspensful write, though... keep up the good work.

~sprints


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:42:41 PM AEST
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Yes this does leave you wondering but that is sci-fi always wondering I thought it was excellent well written leaving you in antisipation do agree you should write apart 2 I would definately read it loved this one
Cathy




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