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[aid] => mick
[title] => NOT HAPPY
[time] => 2005-06-16 23:02:58
[hometext] => I was really not so happy when I wrote this so it might not be the best ever. Feel free to correct anything that I might have done wrong.
[bodytext] => Let’s be happy for a minute. YAY! HAPPY! I wish I could be rightfully happy, but everything’s a wreck and everything is tainted, so how can I be happy when my world is coming down. When the feelings of depression are feeding the voice that screams for me to hurt. It’s not good when all you’re trying to do id live! All I’m trying to do is live. I feel so alone like I got nothing, like the whole ***** world is jumping down my ***** throat, and it won’t fit! I got no one to help me through this! Yah I got help from therapists, and yah people are trying to help me quit but I got no one to relate to, I got family and I know they’re there, and that they care about me, but they’re unable to hear me. Everyone is unable to hear me. I’m screaming with no voice, but the voice that I have in blood. Every laugh, every smile that I fake, I feel the emptiness inside. The hollow pain that is all of me, the smile that I slap on every time that I got nothing, but oh well, what ever. I’m breathing and my heart’s still beating. So that’s happy for me! YAY FOR BEING HAPPY! ‘Cause that’s the thing that I can’t be.
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NOT HAPPY
Contributed by
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:02:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Let’s be happy for a minute. YAY! HAPPY! I wish I could be rightfully happy, but everything’s a wreck and everything is tainted, so how can I be happy when my world is coming down. When the feelings of depression are feeding the voice that screams for me to hurt. It’s not good when all you’re trying to do id live! All I’m trying to do is live. I feel so alone like I got nothing, like the whole ***** world is jumping down my ***** throat, and it won’t fit! I got no one to help me through this! Yah I got help from therapists, and yah people are trying to help me quit but I got no one to relate to, I got family and I know they’re there, and that they care about me, but they’re unable to hear me. Everyone is unable to hear me. I’m screaming with no voice, but the voice that I have in blood. Every laugh, every smile that I fake, I feel the emptiness inside. The hollow pain that is all of me, the smile that I slap on every time that I got nothing, but oh well, what ever. I’m breathing and my heart’s still beating. So that’s happy for me! YAY FOR BEING HAPPY! ‘Cause that’s the thing that I can’t be.
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Re: NOT HAPPY
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 02:53:02 AM AEST
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A masterpeice as we all feel these feelings at times but when the sun comes up that's happy.
Great writing.
huggs, strength, prayer,
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Re: NOT HAPPY
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:42:52 AM AEST
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hey karis or w/e it is lol I saw these two before so you know I love them :)
You might want to add more structure though and make it look like a poem a bit more.
ttyl
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