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Cant you see your prison untold
Feel the now, our world becoming
Every day your floor is falling
In the city of worlds begin
A promise, a hope, of times only win
People you think we listen
All we do is follow your promised rule
How long your jungle your creation
Gonna cage to us your sworn vision
Those a few begin to feel
They know feel the word growing within
Your concrete submission a world unfold
We know the word a world of sold
Day by day your bricks begin to flow
Song a word the steal the glow
We see the bird fly above and look down
The tree that grows within your walkway
The window of urban becoming the trojan
A canal of lost becoming the river
Time to be the few not just the rest.

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The Concrete Jungle

Contributed by mindset on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Look around my friends of bold
Cant you see your prison untold
Feel the now, our world becoming
Every day your floor is falling
In the city of worlds begin
A promise, a hope, of times only win
People you think we listen
All we do is follow your promised rule
How long your jungle your creation
Gonna cage to us your sworn vision
Those a few begin to feel
They know feel the word growing within
Your concrete submission a world unfold
We know the word a world of sold
Day by day your bricks begin to flow
Song a word the steal the glow
We see the bird fly above and look down
The tree that grows within your walkway
The window of urban becoming the trojan
A canal of lost becoming the river
Time to be the few not just the rest.

Copyright © mindset ... [ 2005-06-15 13:55:15]
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Re: The Concrete Jungle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:29:12 PM AEST
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cant blame u in this. good write. true

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