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Array ( [sid] => 97764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love me [time] => 2005-06-12 14:17:30 [hometext] => I wrote this about my self [bodytext] => I was a girl who hated the world
I used my body to sell my soul
every town would brake me with each of thier pay
they would tear out my heart
and leave me in pain

he never found out how I survived
with all of my sadness that I kept inside
he never found out why I would lie
with a smile on my face and the cuts that I would hide

they would love me with thier pay
thye would pay to be with me everyday
they could have me if they prayed
they could rape me in every way

down my knees I wept on the floor
this hopless life I wanted no more
dead in my minde and my bones were so cold
opning my eyes I finaly relized I was alone

I never found out how much that one special guy tried
trying to unravel my sadness, making him blinde

they would love me with thier pay
thye would pay to be with me everyday
they could have me if they prayed
they could rape me in every way

he never found out how I survied
with my life full of denial and lies
he never found out why I would lie
but with my arms covered in blood
and all the darkness inside

I would never know how much he cired
when my rope became tight
on the night that I died

they would love me with thier pay
thye would pay to be with me everyday
they could have me if they prayed
they could rape me in every way [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Taylor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Love me

Contributed by Taylor on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I was a girl who hated the world
I used my body to sell my soul
every town would brake me with each of thier pay
they would tear out my heart
and leave me in pain

he never found out how I survived
with all of my sadness that I kept inside
he never found out why I would lie
with a smile on my face and the cuts that I would hide

they would love me with thier pay
thye would pay to be with me everyday
they could have me if they prayed
they could rape me in every way

down my knees I wept on the floor
this hopless life I wanted no more
dead in my minde and my bones were so cold
opning my eyes I finaly relized I was alone

I never found out how much that one special guy tried
trying to unravel my sadness, making him blinde

they would love me with thier pay
thye would pay to be with me everyday
they could have me if they prayed
they could rape me in every way

he never found out how I survied
with my life full of denial and lies
he never found out why I would lie
but with my arms covered in blood
and all the darkness inside

I would never know how much he cired
when my rope became tight
on the night that I died

they would love me with thier pay
thye would pay to be with me everyday
they could have me if they prayed
they could rape me in every way




Copyright © Taylor ... [ 2005-06-12 14:17:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Love me (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:42:28 PM AEST
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i really really like this...i felt hurt when i read it

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Re: Love me (User Rating: 1 )
by scremingXforXmyXlife on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 12:40:57 AM AEST
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wow, this is deep. its sad, im sorry you felt this way. can you comment my poem? thanks. and i really like this poem.




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