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Array ( [sid] => 97751 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sadness is killing me [time] => 2005-06-12 12:11:18 [hometext] => R.M.Wilder [bodytext] => blind is the feelings i feel today the women i love has gone away
she took my heart and the eyes to my soal
she left nothing else just one giant hole
there wasnt a reason one that could be found
i thought our love was the kind thats is unbound
now im blind in my life and a shell of a man
alone in this world to wander the land

then i saw a light after six years of being blind
so long in the dark her touch was so kind
it was a beautful sight her love was strong
but in my heart i new something was wrong
she also had love someone so true
she didnt want me since she has you

im back alone but something is new
you brought me my eyes atleast your heart shone threw

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sadness is killing me

Contributed by lostrelic on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 12:11:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



blind is the feelings i feel today the women i love has gone away
she took my heart and the eyes to my soal
she left nothing else just one giant hole
there wasnt a reason one that could be found
i thought our love was the kind thats is unbound
now im blind in my life and a shell of a man
alone in this world to wander the land

then i saw a light after six years of being blind
so long in the dark her touch was so kind
it was a beautful sight her love was strong
but in my heart i new something was wrong
she also had love someone so true
she didnt want me since she has you

im back alone but something is new
you brought me my eyes atleast your heart shone threw





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Re: sadness is killing me (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 01:44:39 PM AEST
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this is a lovely poem.just one crito, the spelling could do with some attention.Apart from that it was a moving write




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