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Array ( [sid] => 97693 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Casting Shadows With The Sun [time] => 2005-06-11 20:35:55 [hometext] => it's lonely at the top...but she cannot be whom she's not............ [bodytext] => When it's all said and done
sitting, casting shadows with the sun
whether it's a long haul or just a run
she's clearly been emptied under the gun.............

All the hope has bumped and gone
nothing to stay ever comes along
wearied and unjustly wronged
she's cast aside to be amidst the throng......

What's lost or wasted is always remembered
the trials are never dismembered
no paper left to be tendered
she mutely sacrifices all engendered....

No changes left her room to bring about
left in the darkened maze unable to crawl back out
the forest so far away now, standing empty in the drought
she's lost her way but the siren gave her clout................ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 473 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Casting Shadows With The Sun

Contributed by jaeann on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When it's all said and done
sitting, casting shadows with the sun
whether it's a long haul or just a run
she's clearly been emptied under the gun.............

All the hope has bumped and gone
nothing to stay ever comes along
wearied and unjustly wronged
she's cast aside to be amidst the throng......

What's lost or wasted is always remembered
the trials are never dismembered
no paper left to be tendered
she mutely sacrifices all engendered....

No changes left her room to bring about
left in the darkened maze unable to crawl back out
the forest so far away now, standing empty in the drought
she's lost her way but the siren gave her clout................

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2005-06-11 20:35:55]
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Re: Casting Shadows With The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 05:10:19 AM AEST
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What a emotional poem, your words flow so well together. I liked it.

Jane xoxox

Re: Casting Shadows With The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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very well written..

I like this style of composition..
the rhyming scheme-
though the last line left me a little flat.

Great write though..
you've talent

M.O.H.

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