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Array ( [sid] => 97522 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the love of hate [time] => 2005-06-10 04:07:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => we sit alone in the dark while we converse with silent enemies.
ememies of the past that dont talk or move or breathe
we see them in our mind but others dont see their faces
they are enemies that only you know, that only you see, that only bother you
they haunt you while they follow your every step
and there is no way on earth to make them leave you alone
you see them in your sleep and breathe them by day
while they wander shimmering around a silent courtyard
a courtyard that was once full of roses
but when your enemy entered....they all turned black
black as the night in which they lurk, in which they live, in whick they haunt
you walk along the path not quite knowing the way
but they are always one step ahead of your every move
they know what your thinking, what you're about to say
even before you open your mouth
they control you even when you dont know they're there
and every word they whisper you take straight to heart
they taunt and sneer at you every step you take
but still you wander aimlessly along that path
the path that will lead to freedom, that will lead you away from this enemy
but still they follow
it seems they will never go, never leave, never leave you alone
and then after walking the courtyard path your whole life
taking millions of steps but never getting any closer
realization sinks in and finally you see there never a way to escape
the idea of escape was naive
but you can never leave now
now you have entered the courtyard
and for the rest of existance you will wander that path
searching for freedom but always being followed by your silent enemy
and the worse part is that death is the only way out.............
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 36 [informant] => mel_666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
the love of hate

Contributed by mel_666 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 04:07:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



we sit alone in the dark while we converse with silent enemies.
ememies of the past that dont talk or move or breathe
we see them in our mind but others dont see their faces
they are enemies that only you know, that only you see, that only bother you
they haunt you while they follow your every step
and there is no way on earth to make them leave you alone
you see them in your sleep and breathe them by day
while they wander shimmering around a silent courtyard
a courtyard that was once full of roses
but when your enemy entered....they all turned black
black as the night in which they lurk, in which they live, in whick they haunt
you walk along the path not quite knowing the way
but they are always one step ahead of your every move
they know what your thinking, what you're about to say
even before you open your mouth
they control you even when you dont know they're there
and every word they whisper you take straight to heart
they taunt and sneer at you every step you take
but still you wander aimlessly along that path
the path that will lead to freedom, that will lead you away from this enemy
but still they follow
it seems they will never go, never leave, never leave you alone
and then after walking the courtyard path your whole life
taking millions of steps but never getting any closer
realization sinks in and finally you see there never a way to escape
the idea of escape was naive
but you can never leave now
now you have entered the courtyard
and for the rest of existance you will wander that path
searching for freedom but always being followed by your silent enemy
and the worse part is that death is the only way out.............




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Re: the love of hate (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 04:12:27 AM AEST
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cool poem, welcome to YPDC.


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Re: the love of hate (User Rating: 1 )
by sidra on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:29:05 AM AEST
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very nice write i feel like this alot




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