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Array ( [sid] => 9749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Turmoil [time] => 2003-01-04 18:00:00 [hometext] => Another re-post from 2001. Basically about falling for a friend and the emotional conflict it creates. I realise there is no pattern in the way it's written, I just wrote it as it came out! [bodytext] => Today, I discovered something new
Well, I guess it's something I always knew
but denied the truth and set it aside
as being rediculous, I am out of my mind!
After all, you live so far away
and we live completely different lives
but, after sitting here all alone today
with so many people to talk to
I felt so alone, in a crowded room
for the only person I have grown
to trust and open up to,
the only one I can really talk to
is you, my love, yes you!
No one can come up to standard
no one makes me laugh like you do
Not even my closest friend
can make me feel the way you do.
I realise now how much I miss you
and how empty I feel without you!

We have been through so much in life
Neither of us are ready to commit
to anyone until our lives are straight
But, my love, I have to admit
that my heart has over-taken
every bit of common-sense I had
and released all my emotions
You once told me that this was forbidden
but it's too late, my heart has already spoken
One word from you, and you know
I would be on the next plane to you
and follow my heart to your home

It wasn't meant to be this way
I never meant to depend on you
I told myself I would never give
my heart, my soul or mind to you
I wasn't meant to feel this way
and I wasn't meant to think of you
every moment of every day!
These feelings scare me too!
So, my love, what shall I do?
Shall I walk away from you?
Or do I confess my feelings for you,
at the risk of losing you?
Do I continue to plod along
and deny myself the truth?
Try and keep it all well-hidden
and never reveal my true feelings for you?

Oh, what am I thinking!
There is no decision to make
I cannot walk away from you!
That would be a mistake
It would tear my heart in two
So, there is nothing else to do,
but sit around and wait for you
For this confession would cause you to flee
and I cannot risk losing you,
you are just too precious to me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Debz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Turmoil

Contributed by Debz on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Today, I discovered something new
Well, I guess it's something I always knew
but denied the truth and set it aside
as being rediculous, I am out of my mind!
After all, you live so far away
and we live completely different lives
but, after sitting here all alone today
with so many people to talk to
I felt so alone, in a crowded room
for the only person I have grown
to trust and open up to,
the only one I can really talk to
is you, my love, yes you!
No one can come up to standard
no one makes me laugh like you do
Not even my closest friend
can make me feel the way you do.
I realise now how much I miss you
and how empty I feel without you!

We have been through so much in life
Neither of us are ready to commit
to anyone until our lives are straight
But, my love, I have to admit
that my heart has over-taken
every bit of common-sense I had
and released all my emotions
You once told me that this was forbidden
but it's too late, my heart has already spoken
One word from you, and you know
I would be on the next plane to you
and follow my heart to your home

It wasn't meant to be this way
I never meant to depend on you
I told myself I would never give
my heart, my soul or mind to you
I wasn't meant to feel this way
and I wasn't meant to think of you
every moment of every day!
These feelings scare me too!
So, my love, what shall I do?
Shall I walk away from you?
Or do I confess my feelings for you,
at the risk of losing you?
Do I continue to plod along
and deny myself the truth?
Try and keep it all well-hidden
and never reveal my true feelings for you?

Oh, what am I thinking!
There is no decision to make
I cannot walk away from you!
That would be a mistake
It would tear my heart in two
So, there is nothing else to do,
but sit around and wait for you
For this confession would cause you to flee
and I cannot risk losing you,
you are just too precious to me.




Copyright © Debz ... [ 2003-01-04 18:00:00]
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Re: Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:04:44 PM AEST
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Debz, this is so beautiful....It is something I can relate to...
Jenni


Re: Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 12:21:11 PM AEST
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outstandingly beautiful and so much love for this person, very well wrote!




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