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[title] => An Ode To The Moon
[time] => 2005-06-07 16:33:26
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[bodytext] => This morning when the earth and sky
were burning with the blush of spring,
I saw thee not about me shine
nor all about the robin's wing.
But when the skies had lost their hue
and sunny lights no longer played,
I saw thee and I blest thee too
for glowing on the dreary way.
I only ask one thing of thee:
When life and love have lost their bloom,
may all your glory shine to me
to light.. if not to warm the gloom.
M.O.H.
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An Ode To The Moon
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This morning when the earth and sky
were burning with the blush of spring,
I saw thee not about me shine
nor all about the robin's wing.
But when the skies had lost their hue
and sunny lights no longer played,
I saw thee and I blest thee too
for glowing on the dreary way.
I only ask one thing of thee:
When life and love have lost their bloom,
may all your glory shine to me
to light.. if not to warm the gloom.
M.O.H.
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:57:34 PM AEST
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Nicely spoken by thee...lol Different kind of write for you, but I like it.
Scorp. |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:25:55 PM AEST
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Quite beautifu, Billy. I think many of us wish the very same blessing.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:59:36 PM AEST
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What a nice feeling this gave me, so much is said about the sun but the moon has it's own domain, very nice peice of poetry . . .
Ben
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by Masked_Man on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:53:10 PM AEST
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scorp is right lil different for ya but I love it
an awesome write
MM |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:19:40 PM AEST
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I apologize for getting caught up in "thee" moment everyone.. lol
Im in "thee" process of having "thee" poem edited..
as the word "thee" appears too many times..
lol
deepest regrets..
billy aka M.O.H. |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by waos on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:24:10 PM AEST
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I loved this. I've spent many lonely hours standing at my window looking
out at the moon and the stars. It's loneliness I feel most acutely then,
but yes, the moon lights and can warm the night - as it brings the beauty
to light. This was beautiful imagery!! Awesome work!! Once again I
enjoyed your poetry. I look forward to seeing more.
~Kara |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:31:34 PM AEST
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| if not to warm the gloom.......i like that!!! it sets it for me..... |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:57:43 PM AEST
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| i never use thee in my poems anymore. i rather do miss it. i loved the ending it was spectacular, as was your poem. |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 04:35:56 PM AEST
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Billy~
Your work is always so breath taking and beautiful. I love the moon. You have done a splendid job with this write.
When life and love have lost their bloom,
may all your glory shine to me
to light.. if not to warm the gloom.
Ah yes such beautifully penned words from such a beautiful poet.
Well done Billy~
love always,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: An Ode To The Moon
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 08:06:54 AM AEST
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Of course you know the title had to draw me here ..
Soft and graceful as the moon itself, hun. These words
placed so gently upon the page feel like a delicate caress
it's beautiful .. as are you
~Breezy
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