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[title] => Pleasure Becoming
[time] => 2005-06-07 10:47:53
[hometext] => Short prose view on life. Thanks for reading
[bodytext] => Pleasure Becoming:
The world accelerates on its axis as its inhabitants strive to keep up. A never ending circle, climatically they will all end up in the same situation. Determined to deny destiny they hypocritically don their deaths, losing what is real and forgetting what is right. I sit in the midst with a smile on my face for I have nowhere or no one to be. Alas I hold the dream of what it is like to actually be free.
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Pleasure Becoming
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RGugliotta
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:47:53 AM in AEST
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Pleasure Becoming:
The world accelerates on its axis as its inhabitants strive to keep up. A never ending circle, climatically they will all end up in the same situation. Determined to deny destiny they hypocritically don their deaths, losing what is real and forgetting what is right. I sit in the midst with a smile on my face for I have nowhere or no one to be. Alas I hold the dream of what it is like to actually be free.
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Re: Pleasure Becoming
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:34:10 AM AEST
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isnt it awsome to sit back and watch everyone else run? sitting knowing, not saying, but knowing. Man you summed it all up, words I wouldn't be able to find. Awsome write, with so much imagery...
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Re: Pleasure Becoming
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by apostrophic on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:50:03 AM AEST
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we are all trying to run so quickly
but somehow we seem to forget
... everything.
we have forgotten how to stand still.
i enjoyed this - thankyou. |
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Re: Pleasure Becoming
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 02:11:06 PM AEST
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"Determined to deny destiny, they hypocritically don their deaths, losing what is real and forgetting what is right..." Nicely summed up.
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Re: Pleasure Becoming
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:43:58 PM AEST
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Good write. Short but thought provoking. Thanks for sharing!
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