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Array ( [sid] => 9710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hate, fate, truth, and lies [time] => 2003-01-03 20:00:00 [hometext] => Although the anger I felt when I wrote this was a mistake... [bodytext] => My tears through my veins,
And blood from my eyes.
Laid fallow the fields of the heart.
The end of the truth
And the start of the lies,
Worlds of light torn darkly apart.
When hate steals the soul
No peace brings it back.
With loathing I dare speak the name.
The last time still near.
The demon in black.
My memory certain my shame.
My weakness too great.
One wound and I'd fall.
No wish nor dream to make mend.
A tribute to fate,
And reminder of all
The things that truly don't end. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 304 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SmokinJoeEvil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Hate, fate, truth, and lies

Contributed by SmokinJoeEvil on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My tears through my veins,
And blood from my eyes.
Laid fallow the fields of the heart.
The end of the truth
And the start of the lies,
Worlds of light torn darkly apart.
When hate steals the soul
No peace brings it back.
With loathing I dare speak the name.
The last time still near.
The demon in black.
My memory certain my shame.
My weakness too great.
One wound and I'd fall.
No wish nor dream to make mend.
A tribute to fate,
And reminder of all
The things that truly don't end.

Copyright © SmokinJoeEvil ... [ 2003-01-03 20:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:02:27 PM AEST
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Wow... the first two lines were just amazing I liked this a lot and can't find anything else to say...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:08:05 PM AEST
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I read this poem and thought I'd comment on it cause I did like it. Keep up the great writing.

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:23:16 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write, love the line
"Laid fallow the fields of the heart" sensational line.
You've got the goods, looking forward to more from you
Thanks

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:48:09 AM AEST
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" my tears...no peace bring it back"..these six lines breath takingly beautiful. A billiant writing..Venkat

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:23:23 AM AEST
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A good write....and when i get angry isnt a mistake......especially when the person hurts me............:-)

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:23:28 AM AEST
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A good write....and when i get angry isnt a mistake......especially when the person hurts me............:-)

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamweave18 on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:18:38 PM AEST
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My heart feels this ache right now. Thanks for helping me let a little bit of it out!

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by DarylLew151 on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 09:13:55 PM AEST
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Wow, Shakespear Meets Poe. I think i'm gonna have to read your other things now.

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:02:44 AM AEST
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I just wanted to tell you that i thought your poem was very good, and i look forward to reading more of your work!

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 01:05:39 PM AEST
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That line is one of my favorites! Unfortunately good metaphors like this seem to elude me more than they tend to seek me out. Thank you for your comment.

Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:29:56 PM AEST
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Splendid! BRAVO!
Stitch

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