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Array ( [sid] => 96898 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Turn [time] => 2005-06-05 10:11:53 [hometext] => Ive given all i can [bodytext] => I dont know if i can do this anymore
I held on for so long
Im not that strong..
Its like i dont even exist
u know wat bothers me
but u still take the risk...

See wat i See,
Hear wat i Hear for just one day
You would understand,
Why i want to run away....
Leave this place
start from new
get away
away from you..

Have all this love kept inside
but u dont except it
so it has to hide
Ive given up
U better change
or we will both go through
alot of pain... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Northernrick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Your Turn

Contributed by Northernrick on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I dont know if i can do this anymore
I held on for so long
Im not that strong..
Its like i dont even exist
u know wat bothers me
but u still take the risk...

See wat i See,
Hear wat i Hear for just one day
You would understand,
Why i want to run away....
Leave this place
start from new
get away
away from you..

Have all this love kept inside
but u dont except it
so it has to hide
Ive given up
U better change
or we will both go through
alot of pain...




Copyright © Northernrick ... [ 2005-06-05 10:11:53]
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Re: Your Turn (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:07:16 PM AEST
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maybe you should just let go, i know the thought of it sends chills down your spine, because you truely love the person, but letting go my help.. but this was a great poem.. good job..
tasha


Re: Your Turn (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:36:23 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, as usual.
I sense the pain here.. I agree with tasha letting go might help..
Whatever you decide just keep writing, its beautiful.

xoxo
--amanda--




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