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Array ( [sid] => 96565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sober Rain? [time] => 2005-06-02 01:46:07 [hometext] => I dono this is just a rough draft i guess, it could use a lot of work, like the title and the verses and well about everything...idk i guess i like because it explains how i feel a little [bodytext] => I won’t say goodbye until we’re over.
And if we are I won’t stay sober.
Cover my tears with stolen beer.
Muffle my screams from my fear.

Mistakes were made I don’t know how.
In my tears is where I drown.
All this pain it fades away.
Every time I see your face.

As I say goodbye because we’re over.
Nothings wrong I’m just not sober
Rambling on I know it’s over.
Take my life a drink at a time.
Take my beer It’s just not right.

Rate my pain I don’t know how.
I’m so sad I smile not frown.
Cry these tears, like November rain.
In the end it’s all the same.

I’m won’t say goodbye this isn’t over.
I’m so glad, can’t believe I’m sober.
Hold my breath until I scream.
I love you so much it’s not a dream.

And you love me I don’t know how.
I’m so glad these things worked out.
In the end it’s not all the same.
I’m no longer crying it’s really rain. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shadowmaster_045 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Sober Rain?

Contributed by shadowmaster_045 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:46:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I won’t say goodbye until we’re over.
And if we are I won’t stay sober.
Cover my tears with stolen beer.
Muffle my screams from my fear.

Mistakes were made I don’t know how.
In my tears is where I drown.
All this pain it fades away.
Every time I see your face.

As I say goodbye because we’re over.
Nothings wrong I’m just not sober
Rambling on I know it’s over.
Take my life a drink at a time.
Take my beer It’s just not right.

Rate my pain I don’t know how.
I’m so sad I smile not frown.
Cry these tears, like November rain.
In the end it’s all the same.

I’m won’t say goodbye this isn’t over.
I’m so glad, can’t believe I’m sober.
Hold my breath until I scream.
I love you so much it’s not a dream.

And you love me I don’t know how.
I’m so glad these things worked out.
In the end it’s not all the same.
I’m no longer crying it’s really rain.




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Re: Sober Rain? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:10:26 AM AEST
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i liked this poem, the rhyme scheme was simple. but you had a couple of really good lines.


Re: Sober Rain? (User Rating: 1 )
by 15andcounting on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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This poem is great. Original, and unique, it made for a great break from all of the sad, emo poems I've been reading. lol.....It's awesome. Keep Writing!


Re: Sober Rain? (User Rating: 1 )
by luckedout on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 03:53:11 PM AEST
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awesome poem, I really like the turn around at the end




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