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Array ( [sid] => 96526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unfamiliar Faces [time] => 2005-06-01 18:57:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I look at the people
that i thought i once knew
but something is different
between me and you

we used to be so close
but now so far apart
i try to see what's happening
by looking deep inside my heart

i just dont understand
why this isn't right
i try to see the real you
while blocking out the light

I've looked at you all
and seen what's gone down
and i try to smile quickly
before i turns into a frown..

i wish it was the same
exactly like it used to be
we would all be the same
together they would see

but i know that won't happen
because of the changes we've went through
i wish i knew those faces
and all that came with them too! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => twisted_dreams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Unfamiliar Faces

Contributed by twisted_dreams on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 06:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I look at the people
that i thought i once knew
but something is different
between me and you

we used to be so close
but now so far apart
i try to see what's happening
by looking deep inside my heart

i just dont understand
why this isn't right
i try to see the real you
while blocking out the light

I've looked at you all
and seen what's gone down
and i try to smile quickly
before i turns into a frown..

i wish it was the same
exactly like it used to be
we would all be the same
together they would see

but i know that won't happen
because of the changes we've went through
i wish i knew those faces
and all that came with them too!

Copyright © twisted_dreams ... [ 2005-06-01 18:57:01]
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Re: Unfamiliar Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_hearted09 on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:47:16 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem.. I think it is great.. But we need to talk! Cuz I also want things to be the same as they use to be!!

Re: Unfamiliar Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_for_eternity on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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This is a really awesome poem, it's really sad but it's still awesomely written, and I think it might be one of if not your your best... but I really do hope you talk to broken_hearted09, maybe something could change, spill your heart to her and see what magic could happen... good luck, and good write. l8erz

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